列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure clear korte hobe. Apnar answer e redundancy ache, ar kichu linking words use korle answer ta aro natural hobe. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar example dite paren jemon kon product gula apni list e rakhte paren.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. For example, I usually write down groceries like milk and bread so I don't forget them. This method saves me time and avoids unnecessary purchases.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni direct question er uttor diyechen, kintu supporting details aro clear ar specific hote pare. Linking words use korle answer ta aro logical hobe.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks and complete them on time. For instance, I list my meetings and deadlines, which keeps me focused and productive.

建議: Apnar answer e sentence structure ar grammar khub important. Apni jeta bolte chachhen seta clear korte hobe. Apni kichu linking words use korte paren jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta logical hoy. Specific karon dite paren jemon list making time consuming mone hoy.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they may feel that lists make their work more complicated instead of easier.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice improve kora dorkar. Apni clear ar concise sentence use korben. Linking words use korle answer ta aro natural hobe. Apni specific karon dite paren jemon phone e list rakha convenient ar always available.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. Unlike paper, which can be lost, my phone helps me access my list anytime easily.

× Yes I do, I make Lister when I shop because of list making is a good thing to bring anything if I forgot that helps me to find out that kind of products that I forget all the time.

✓ Yes, I do. I make lists when I shop because making a list is a good way to bring anything. If I forget something, it helps me find the products I often forget.

The phrase 'list making' should be 'making a list' to correctly use the gerund form as a noun. Also, 'Lister' is incorrect; the plural noun 'lists' is appropriate here. The sentence structure was confusing and needed to be split for clarity.

× Yes I do, I make Lister when I shop because of list making is a good thing to bring anything if I forgot that helps me to find out that kind of products that I forget all the time.

✓ Yes, I do. I make lists when I shop because making a list is a good way to bring anything. If I forget something, it helps me find the products I often forget.

The word 'Lister' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'lists' because the speaker refers to making multiple lists or a list in general.

× Yes I do, I make Lister when I shop because of list making is a good thing to bring anything if I forgot that helps me to find out that kind of products that I forget all the time.

✓ Yes, I do. I make lists when I shop because making a list is a good way to bring anything. If I forget something, it helps me find the products I often forget.

The use of 'forgot' is incorrect here; it should be 'forget' to match the present tense context of the sentence.

× Yes I do list of when I go open in in work. Yes it works very much because of it helps me to finish work in time accordingly.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go to work. Yes, it works very well because it helps me finish work on time accordingly.

The phrase 'do list of when I go open in in work' is incorrect. It should be 'make a list when I go to work'. Also, 'works very much' is unnatural; 'works very well' is better.

× Yes I do list of when I go open in in work. Yes it works very much because of it helps me to finish work in time accordingly.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go to work. Yes, it works very well because it helps me finish work on time accordingly.

The prepositions 'of', 'open', and 'in in' are incorrectly used. The correct phrase is 'make a list when I go to work'.

× I think the thing the list making make the work more more problematic or anything else that's why they don't like to making list for the work.

✓ I think making lists makes the work more problematic or causes other issues; that's why they don't like making lists for work.

'The list making make' should be 'making lists makes' to correctly use the gerund and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'.

× I think the thing the list making make the work more more problematic or anything else that's why they don't like to making list for the work.

✓ I think making lists makes the work more problematic or causes other issues; that's why they don't like making lists for work.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'list making'. It should be 'makes'.

× Nowadays people are most screen oriented so paper maybe lost anywhere but phone in my pocket and that's why I think I prefer most in phone.

✓ Nowadays, people are more screen-oriented, so paper may be lost anywhere, but the phone is in my pocket, and that's why I think I prefer using my phone.

The phrase 'prefer most in phone' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer using my phone'. Also, 'paper maybe lost anywhere' should be 'paper may be lost anywhere'.

× Nowadays people are most screen oriented so paper maybe lost anywhere but phone in my pocket and that's why I think I prefer most in phone.

✓ Nowadays, people are more screen-oriented, so paper may be lost anywhere, but the phone is in my pocket, and that's why I think I prefer using my phone.

The pronoun 'phone' needs a determiner 'the' to specify it. Also, 'prefer most in phone' is incorrect pronoun and preposition usage.