列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤り（"I when I go shopping"）、冗長な表現（"making list is very useful when you go to shopping because you don't remember"）があり、より自然で効果的な表現に改善が必要です。具体的な理由や例を加え、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, sometimes I make a shopping list on my smartphone because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"it must be a list"）、繰り返し（"many tasks or many assignments"）、接続詞の不足が見られます。より自然な表現と具体的な説明を加え、接続詞で文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

範例: Actually, I don't have a job because I am a student, but when I have many assignments, I make a list to organize my tasks because it's hard to remember everything.

建議: 回答は曖昧で、文法の誤り（"I don't have an idea about it"）、繰り返し（"they they"）があります。より明確で自然な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I'm not sure, but I think some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory or feel it's unnecessary.

建議: 過去形の誤用（"I preferred"）、不自然な表現（"I bring my phone to everywhere then I don't have a paper"）があります。より自然で正確な時制を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I don't need to worry about forgetting a paper list.

× I think making list is very useful when you go to shopping because you don't remember.

✓ I think making a list is very useful when you go shopping because you don't remember.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'to'.

× I think making list is very useful when you go to shopping because you don't remember.

✓ I think making a list is very useful when you go shopping because you don't remember.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'go' when followed by an activity verb like 'shopping'. The correct form is 'go shopping'.

× Actually I don't work because I am a student, but when I have to do many tasks or many assignments it must be a list because if there are many things to do, you can't remember.

✓ Actually, I don't work because I am a student, but when I have to do many tasks or assignments, I must make a list because if there are many things to do, you can't remember.

The modal verb 'must' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'make' to form 'must make a list'. Also, 'many assignments' is sufficient without repeating 'many tasks or many assignments'.

× Well, I don't have an idea about it, but I assume that they are confident in their memories or they they feel they don't have to.

✓ Well, I don't have an idea about it, but I assume that they are confident in their memories or they feel they don't have to.

The repetition of 'they' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'they'.

× I preferred making lists in my phone because I bring my phone to everywhere then I don't have a paper.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because I bring my phone everywhere, so I don't have paper.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context is present preference, so it should be 'prefer'. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct preposition for using a device. 'Bring my phone to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'bring my phone everywhere'. 'I don't have a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here, so 'I don't have paper' is correct.