列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me focus on the items I need rather than being distracted by attractive products, which also helps me save money.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有些语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意动词搭配和时态的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it really helps improve my efficiency because I know exactly what tasks I need to complete and can follow the correct order.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议减少重复，使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they are more casual and prefer to make decisions instantly rather than planning in advance.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇表达观点。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better, while using my phone might make me forget more easily.

× Yes, I usually will make this when I shop because it can help me to focus on what I need rather than those gorgeous that I may interested in and it can help me save my money.

✓ Yes, I usually make this when I shop because it can help me focus on what I need rather than those gorgeous things that I may be interested in, and it can help me save my money.

句中“usually will make”中，通常表示习惯动作时不需要使用“will”，直接用一般现在时“usually make”即可。

× Yes, I usually will make this when I shop because it can help me to focus on what I need rather than those gorgeous that I may interested in and it can help me save my money.

✓ Yes, I usually make this when I shop because it can help me focus on what I need rather than those gorgeous things that I may be interested in, and it can help me save my money.

“those gorgeous that I may interested in”中，‘gorgeous’是形容词，缺少名词，且‘interested’缺少被动结构，应为‘be interested in’。应补充名词‘things’，并改为‘may be interested in’。

× Yes, I also make a list for my work and it really helps me to improve the efficiency during the work because I can know what I need to do every single task and I can follow up the sequence to do the job.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for my work and it really helps me improve efficiency during work because I know what I need to do for every single task and I can follow the sequence to do the job.

“helps me to improve the efficiency during the work”中，‘improve the efficiency’应为‘improve efficiency’，且‘during the work’中‘the’多余，应为‘during work’。‘I can know’不符合习惯表达，应为‘I know’。

× I think maybe because they they are more casual and they don't like, they don't like planning things in advance. They prefer to make a decision. In instantly.

✓ I think maybe it's because they are more casual and don't like planning things in advance. They prefer to make decisions instantly.

句子结构混乱，重复‘they’，‘prefer to make a decision. In instantly.’不完整且错误，应合并为‘prefer to make decisions instantly’。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more convenient for me because it can help me to remember things by writing down with my hand.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more convenient for me as it helps me remember things by writing them down by hand.

‘writing down with my hand’中‘with’用法不当，习惯表达是‘write down by hand’。

× If I nodded on the phone, it may that myself forget more.

✓ If I note on the phone, I may forget more.

‘nodded’用错，应为‘note’（记下）；‘it may that myself forget more’结构错误，‘myself’用法错误，应直接用‘I’。句子应简化为‘If I note on the phone, I may forget more.’