列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct minor grammar errors, such as 'to don't forget about' should be 'so I don't forget'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because I tend to forget things easily, and it helps me remember items my wife needs at home.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using better linking words and correcting tense consistency. For example, use 'I have a lot to do' instead of 'I had'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and structured.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list at work because I have many tasks, and listing them helps me remember and complete each one by the end of the day.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to organize your thoughts better and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'and that's it'.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember tasks easily, so they don't feel the need to write them down. Also, making lists might cause stress or anxiety for some.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, say 'If it's a shopping list' and 'for work-related tasks'. Also, avoid repeating 'prefer to write it' twice.

範例: It depends on the list type. If it's a shopping list, I prefer using my phone, but for work-related tasks, I like writing them on paper and posting it on my wall to see it frequently.

× Yes, actually I make a list every time I want to go for shopping because I forgot stuff easily and whenever my wife wants something in the house I create a list in my phone and to don't forget about.

✓ Yes, actually I make a list every time I want to go shopping because I forget stuff easily and whenever my wife wants something in the house I create a list on my phone so I don't forget about it.

The sentence contains present tense errors such as 'forgot' which should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The phrase 'to don't forget about' is ungrammatical; it should be 'so I don't forget about it' to express purpose correctly.

× Yes, most of the time I make a list of my work because I had a lot to do during my work day and I need to list them as a task so I won't forget any of them and tick them one by one till the end of the day.

✓ Yes, most of the time I make a list of my work because I have a lot to do during my work day and I need to list them as tasks so I won't forget any of them and tick them one by one till the end of the day.

The phrase 'I had a lot to do' incorrectly uses past tense 'had' when the present tense 'have' is appropriate to describe habitual actions. Also, 'as a task' should be plural 'as tasks' to agree with 'them'.

× Personally I think they have a more organized brain and they can memorize their task more easily and they don't need to use a list because they maybe get the stress or anxiety and that's it.

✓ Personally I think they have a more organized brain and they can memorize their tasks more easily and they don't need to use a list because they may get stress or anxiety and that's it.

The modal verb 'maybe' is incorrectly used; the correct modal verb is 'may' to express possibility. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'their'. The article 'the' before 'stress or anxiety' is unnecessary and should be omitted.

× It depends on the type of that list I want to work on. If it's shopping list, I prefer to write it down on my phone, but if it's work related to stuff, I prefer to write it on a piece of paper and put it on my wall so I can look at it every time.

✓ It depends on the type of list I want to work on. If it's a shopping list, I prefer to write it down on my phone, but if it's work-related stuff, I prefer to write it on a piece of paper and put it on my wall so I can look at it every time.

The phrase 'type of that list' is incorrect; it should be 'type of list'. 'Shopping list' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Work related to stuff' is awkward; the correct form is 'work-related stuff' using a hyphen to form a compound adjective.