列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意冠词的使用（如"a to-do list"），动词时态和形式（"when I go shopping"），并尝试用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily, and that can upset my parents.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I usually make a long-term list for my work and set reminders on my phone. However, sometimes I just do tasks based on my priorities at the moment.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并用更具体的词汇表达观点。

範例: I understand why some people dislike making lists because plans can change frequently, making previous lists less useful.

建議: 回答中有词汇使用错误（"mix"应为"make"），表达不够准确。建议使用正确的词汇，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it allows me to set reminders, which help me follow the list more easily.

× Yes, most of the time I need to make A to do list when go shopping because I'm easily forgot something and it might cause my parents angry.

✓ Yes, most of the time I need to make a to-do list when I go shopping because I easily forget something and it might make my parents angry.

这里“a to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连写为“to-do list”，表示一个清单。动词“go”前缺少主语“I”。“I'm easily forgot”中“forgot”应为动词原形“forget”，因为“easily”后接动词原形。最后“cause my parents angry”应改为“make my parents angry”，因为“make”后接形容词表示使某人感到某种情绪。

× I usually make a long term list for my work and I will remember I will set a reminder on my phone, but most of the time I always just do what I really want when I when I have to do it.

✓ I usually make a long-term list for my work and I will set a reminder on my phone, but most of the time I just do what I really want when I have to do it.

“long term list”应加连字符为“long-term list”，表示复合形容词。句中“I will remember”多余且语义不清，应删除。重复的“when I”应去掉一个。

× In fact, I can fully understand them because things always change and the and making the plan before might not be useful.

✓ In fact, I can fully understand them because things always change and making the plan before might not be useful.

句中出现了重复的连词“and the and”，应删除多余部分，保持句子通顺。

× I prefer to mix the list on my phone because I can have a reminder on my phone which can help me to follow the list.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I can have a reminder on my phone which can help me follow the list.

“mix the list”用词不当，应为“make the list”，表示制作清单。动词“help”后面接动词原形时不需要“to”，所以“help me to follow”应改为“help me follow”。