列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid redundancy. For example, say: "Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need and also allows me to set a budget."

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need and also allows me to set a budget.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say: "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks more efficiently and stay organized."

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks more efficiently and stay organized.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or they prefer to remember things naturally."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or they prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question. Try to answer clearly and use linking words. For example: "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit it anytime."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit it anytime.

× Yes, I will make a list before I go to shop is because it can help me buy the thing when I want.

✓ Yes, I will make a list before I go shopping because it can help me buy the things I want.

The original sentence incorrectly combines future tense 'will make' with an awkward phrase 'go to shop is because'. The phrase 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' (gerund form). Also, 'the thing when I want' is unclear; it should be 'the things I want' to indicate plural and clarity.

× Besides, it can uh set a budget for me when I am go shopping.

✓ Besides, it can set a budget for me when I am going shopping.

The phrase 'I am go shopping' is incorrect; after 'am' we need the present participle form 'going' to form the present continuous tense 'I am going shopping'.

× Yes, I also will make a list for my work because it will improve the efficiency that I complete the work.

✓ Yes, I will also make a list for my work because it will improve the efficiency with which I complete the work.

The placement of 'also' is better after 'will' for natural English. The phrase 'improve the efficiency that I complete the work' is awkward; it should be 'improve the efficiency with which I complete the work' to correctly link efficiency and the action.

× This this ways was help me concern the.

✓ This way helps me stay focused.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'This this ways was help me concern the' does not form a proper sentence. A clearer, grammatically correct sentence is 'This way helps me stay focused.' which conveys the intended meaning.

× Nowadays, people like to make a list before they do a thing, because people will. Forgot the thing that, uh, they, they want to do easily.

✓ Nowadays, people like to make a list before they do something because they might easily forget what they want to do.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'People will. Forgot' is incorrect; 'will forget' or 'might forget' is correct. Also, 'do a thing' is unnatural; 'do something' is better. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct tense.

× Yes, it can be a ways to improve you and let you to complete the thing that you want to.

✓ Yes, it can be a way to improve yourself and help you complete the things you want to.

'a ways' should be singular 'a way'. 'improve you' is incorrect; reflexive pronoun 'yourself' is needed. 'let you to complete' should be 'help you complete' without 'to'. 'the thing that you want to' is better as 'the things you want to' for naturalness.

× Besides you don't be lazy to complete your work.

✓ Besides, you won't be lazy to complete your work.

'don't be lazy' is incorrect here; to express future possibility, 'won't be lazy' is better. Also, a comma after 'Besides' improves sentence flow.