列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words for coherence. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I want' and 'things'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop, especially if I have many items to buy. This helps me focus on what I need and avoid buying unnecessary things, which saves money.

建議: Your answer is honest but a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas logically with linking words and avoid vague phrases like 'consider the list is usually on the opposite what I'm doing'. Be more specific about how lists help you.

範例: Yes, I make lists for work, but I don't always follow them strictly because I tend to be spontaneous. However, lists help me concentrate and ensure I complete my tasks on time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid repeating 'I think' and incomplete sentences like 'they can be more'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it creates pressure and a rigid schedule. They prefer to work intuitively, which allows them more flexibility and creativity.

建議: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, but watch for minor grammar issues and redundancy like 'But however'. Use linking words smoothly and be concise.

範例: It depends on the task. For long-term planning, I prefer paper lists because they help me organize my thoughts quickly. However, for my workout routine, I use my phone since it's more convenient and accessible anytime.

× Yes, If there's a lot of random little things that I want to buy, I would definitely make a list.

✓ Yes, if there are a lot of random little things that I want to buy, I will definitely make a list.

The original sentence uses 'would' which is a conditional modal verb, but the context is a general habit or preference, so 'will' is more appropriate to express a definite intention in the future. Also, 'If' should be lowercase as it is in the middle of the sentence.

× Yes, If there's a lot of random little things that I want to buy, I would definitely make a list.

✓ Yes, if there are a lot of random little things that I want to buy, I will definitely make a list.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'a lot of random little things' is plural, so the correct form is 'there are'.

× So I do make lists when I am into shopping and specific things, yeah.

✓ So I do make lists when I am shopping for specific things, yeah.

The phrase 'into shopping' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'shopping for' when referring to buying specific items. 'Into' is used to express interest, not the act of shopping itself.

× I feel like I'm a more of a spontaneous person than a well organized person.

✓ I feel like I'm more of a spontaneous person than a well-organized person.

The article 'a' before 'more' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'More of a' is the correct phrase without the extra 'a' before 'more'. Also, 'well organized' should be hyphenated as 'well-organized' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× I will finish the work eventually but consider the list is usually on the opposite what I'm doing.

✓ I will finish the work eventually, but the list usually contains tasks opposite to what I'm doing.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Consider the list is usually on the opposite what I'm doing' is not grammatically correct. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I think the list will add a little bit too much pressure and then give them a tight schedule or give them a unflexible working environment.

✓ I think the list will add a bit too much pressure and then give them a tight schedule or an inflexible working environment.

The phrase 'a little bit too much' is redundant; 'a bit too much' is more natural. Also, 'a unflexible' is incorrect because 'unflexible' starts with a vowel sound, so it should be 'an inflexible'. 'Unflexible' is less common than 'inflexible'.

× So I think some people will prefer to work by themselves and intuitively.

✓ So I think some people will prefer to work by themselves and intuitively.

No correction needed here as the pronouns are used correctly.

× I find it more convenient and accessible to use my phone since I'm easily updated an access list anytime.

✓ I find it more convenient and accessible to use my phone since I can easily update and access the list anytime.

The phrase 'I'm easily updated an access list' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I can easily update and access the list'. The modal verb 'can' is needed to express ability, and the verbs 'update' and 'access' should be in base form.