列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用完整句子表达原因。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节和支持信息。建议扩展回答，说明是否有效并给出理由。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议用更自然的表达说明原因，并举例说明。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

建議: 回答有一定逻辑，但句子不完整且表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子并连接观点。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing, and I think looking at the phone for a long time is bad for my health.

× Yes I do and I think I want to buy a list. That can. Makes me don't forget.

✓ Yes, I do and I think I want to buy a list. That can help me not forget.

原句中“Makes me don't forget”结构不正确，动词后不应直接跟否定形式“don't”，应使用动词原形或不定式结构。建议改为“help me not forget”，表达更自然。

× Because the list can helps people. Remember something and help them to become better, to do something.

✓ Because the list can help people remember something and help them become better at doing something.

“can”后面应接动词原形，不能加“s”，所以“helps”应改为“help”。此外，句子断裂，需合并为完整句子。

× I like to make a list on paper because I like writing and I think. Long time to watch the phone is not good for body.

✓ I like to make a list on paper because I like writing and I think spending a long time looking at the phone is not good for the body.

“Long time to watch the phone”表达不自然，应使用“spending a long time looking at the phone”。另外，“for body”缺少冠词，应为“for the body”。