列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I do make a list usually when I shop because I am a notes person and I create notes every time. It is a good way to like remember things and to get all of the things.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I always make a list for my work and it is helpful for me. For example, when I have appointments I usually set alarms and reminders for that so they can remind me on time and I am always on time.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Some people don't like making list because they think it is difficult work to do. Every time they have to pick a pen and paper and write down the things. But they are not that much interesting in writing down all of the things.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make list on my phone because it's more convenient to me Cos I do carry my phone everywhere and if I make a list in the paper I can forget it at home. For example, I usually put all of the grocery items that I need and the notes on my phone and I think that's most reliable way.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'like' and redundant phrases such as 'every time'. Try to directly state your habit and reason with a smooth flow.
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I find it helps me remember everything I need and stay organized.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by avoiding repetition of 'on time'. Also, try to be more specific about how lists help you at work.
範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me keep track of my tasks. For instance, I set alarms and reminders for appointments, which ensures I never miss them.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 65.0建議: Your answer has some grammar issues and could be more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'not that much interesting'. Try to explain reasons clearly and concisely.
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious to write things down, especially if they have to use pen and paper every time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by avoiding informal words like 'Cos' and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be concise.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I always carry it with me, so I won't forget my list like I might with paper. For example, I keep all my grocery items and notes on my phone, which I find very reliable.
文法
× Some people don't like making list because they think it is difficult work to do.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it is difficult work to do.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about lists in general.
× I prefer to make list on my phone because it's more convenient to me Cos I do carry my phone everywhere and if I make a list in the paper I can forget it at home.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient for me because I carry my phone everywhere and if I make a list on paper I can forget it at home.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to refer to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'on the paper' is corrected to 'on paper' as the idiomatic expression does not use the definite article. 'Cos' is informal and replaced with 'because' for clarity and formality. 'Convenient to me' is corrected to 'convenient for me' as 'convenient' is followed by 'for' when indicating the person benefiting.
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