列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I forget important items, so making a list could help me shop more efficiently.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy cố gắng cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

範例: I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. It works well and keeps me organized throughout the day.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự cụ thể và mạch lạc. Bạn nên giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or difficult to remember to check them. Also, they may prefer to rely on memory instead.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone using a note-taking app because it's convenient and easy to organize my tasks.

× When I go shopping I usually don't make a list because I feel it's difficult to remember everything.

✓ When I go shopping, I usually don't make a list because I find it difficult to remember everything.

The verb 'feel' is not the best choice here; 'find' is more appropriate to express difficulty in remembering. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause 'When I go shopping'. This improves clarity and correctness.

× I need advice.

✓ I need some advice.

The noun 'advice' is uncountable and usually requires a quantifier like 'some' when used in affirmative sentences. Omitting 'some' makes the sentence sound incomplete.

× Sometimes I prefer to buy something.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to buy something specific.

The sentence is vague and incomplete in context. Adding 'specific' clarifies the meaning, but this is more about clarity than grammar. Alternatively, the sentence could be omitted if it doesn't fit the context.

× When I make a work I don't make a leave for work because I so I think difficult to remember it to do this and I don't know what.

✓ When I do work, I don't take leave because I find it difficult to remember what to do, and I don't know what to do.

The phrase 'make a work' is incorrect; 'do work' is correct. 'Make a leave' should be 'take leave'. The sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity; restructuring is necessary. Also, 'I think difficult' should be 'I find it difficult'. This correction addresses multiple grammar issues including verb usage and sentence structure.

× Because some people don't like making this, because some people difficult to remember and I don't know.

✓ Because some people don't like making lists, as they find it difficult to remember things, and I don't know why.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. 'Making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. The sentence needs conjunctions and proper structure to convey the meaning clearly.

× No, I I prefer to take note in a app at furniture notes because I feel so happy in understanding. I remember I why not?

✓ No, I prefer to take notes in an app called Furniture Notes because I feel happy understanding it. I remember well, so why not?

The phrase 'take note in a app' should be 'take notes in an app'. The app name should be capitalized and preceded by 'called'. 'I feel so happy in understanding' is awkward; 'I feel happy understanding it' is better. The last sentence is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.