列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct words and sentence structures, for example, use 'list' instead of 'leach' and 'helps me avoid buying unwanted things'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items, which saves money.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use the correct tense and clearer phrases, such as 'I don't make a list for work because I remember everything in my mind'. Also, explain why you prefer flexibility with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I remember all the tasks in my mind. Moreover, I prefer to be flexible and add tasks as needed.

建議: Your answer has vocabulary and grammar errors. Use correct words like 'making lists' and 'time-consuming activity'. Also, provide clearer reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it is a time-consuming activity. Instead, they prefer to remember things mentally and focus on other tasks they enjoy.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me'. Also, use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. This way, I can easily check my activities, update them whenever needed, and even share them with my friends.

× Yes I make a leach when I shop because I remember what I can buy and it helped me do too much buying unwanted things and help to save money.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I remember what I can buy and it helps me avoid buying unwanted things and helps to save money.

The word 'leach' is incorrect; the correct word is 'list' which is singular. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense context. 'Do too much buying unwanted things' is awkward; it is better expressed as 'avoid buying unwanted things'. The verbs should be consistent in present tense to match the habitual action.

× No, I don't make a list when I was walked because I remember all things in my brain and I think I like more flexible and add more things which I need so I don't make a list.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I walk because I remember everything in my brain and I think I am more flexible and can add more things which I need, so I don't make a list.

The phrase 'when I was walked' is incorrect; it should be 'when I walk' to indicate present habitual action. 'All things' is better as 'everything'. 'I like more flexible' is incorrect; it should be 'I am more flexible'. The sentence needs proper verb forms and clarity to express the intended meaning.

× Some people don't making Liz because they think it's a time risk based activity.

✓ Some people don't make lists because they think it's a time-risk-based activity.

The phrase 'don't making' is incorrect; after 'don't' the base form of the verb 'make' should be used. Also, 'Liz' is a misspelling of 'lists'. The phrase 'time risk based' should be hyphenated as 'time-risk-based' to correctly form a compound adjective.

× Some people don't making Liz because they think it's a time risk based activity. They remember all the thing in their brain and they take other activities which they want to do.

✓ Some people don't make lists because they think it's a time-risk-based activity. They remember all the things in their brain and they do other activities which they want to do.

'All the thing' should be 'all the things' to match plural form. 'Take other activities' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'do other activities'. The verb form after 'don't' should be base form 'make' not 'making'.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it is all the day with me and I can easily see which activity I want to do and also I change it whenever I need and I also share activities with my other friends.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is with me all day and I can easily see which activities I want to do. Also, I can change it whenever I need and share activities with my friends.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to make' is required, not just 'make'. 'It is all the day with me' is awkward; correct phrase is 'it is with me all day'. 'Which activity' should be plural 'which activities' to match context. 'I also share activities with my other friends' is better as 'share activities with my friends' for naturalness.