列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、"what I want to buy" と "what I should buy" の表現が少し冗長です。より簡潔に、かつ具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget essential items like fruits and vegetables.

建議: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。"completely figured what I should do for the next" は意味が不明瞭なので、明確で自然な表現に直しましょう。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for work because it helps me organize my tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

建議: 文法的に不自然で、"hesitate it" や "makes trouble to make it" は誤用です。理由を明確にし、自然な英語表現を使うことが必要です。

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally.

建議: 繰り返しや冗長な表現があり、"with my with on paper" は誤りです。より簡潔で明確な表現に改善しましょう。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to edit and update them anytime, unlike paper lists.

× I think it it works because when I make a list that is completely figured what I should do for the next.

✓ I think it works because when I make a list, it clearly shows what I should do next.

The original sentence has a repeated word 'it it' and an awkward phrase 'that is completely figured what I should do for the next.' The correction uses present tense appropriately and clarifies the meaning by rephrasing to 'it clearly shows what I should do next.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think they hesitate it because it takes a long time and it makes trouble to make it.

✓ I think they hesitate because it takes a long time and causes trouble to make a list.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used after 'hesitate.' 'Hesitate' is an intransitive verb and does not take an object. Also, 'makes trouble to make it' is awkward; 'causes trouble to make a list' is clearer. The correction removes the incorrect pronoun and improves sentence clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I want to fix it I can do it very easily with my phone, but with my with on paper I can't fix it by by myself.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I want to fix it, I can do it very easily with my phone, but with paper, I can't fix it by myself.

The phrase 'with my with on paper' is incorrect and redundant. The preposition 'with' is misused here. The correction removes the extra words and uses 'with paper' to indicate the medium. Also, 'by by myself' has a repeated word which is corrected to 'by myself.' This improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.