列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce filler words like "umm" to make your speech sound more natural and fluent. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use more precise vocabulary, for example, say "unnecessary items" instead of "useless stuff."

範例: Yes, definitely. I make a list every day before shopping because it helps me focus on what I really need. This way, I shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.

建議: Improve sentence structure by avoiding informal phrases like "you know" and use linking words such as "therefore" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise and clear in your explanation.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because our brains cannot remember everything. Therefore, I write tasks down and complete them one by one, which helps me stay organized and finish all my work on time.

建議: Avoid repeating words like "think" and "stuff" and use more precise vocabulary such as "tasks" or "responsibilities." Also, clarify your ideas and complete your sentences to avoid confusion.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it reminds them of many tasks and limited time, which causes stress. However, if they focus on completing tasks one by one, they might feel less overwhelmed.

建議: Use consistent verb tenses and complete your sentences clearly. Also, specify what "are definitely more convenient" refers to, and use linking words to compare past and present preferences.

範例: When I was young, I preferred making lists on paper because I enjoyed using stationery and memos. However, nowadays, I find making lists on my phone more convenient since it is easily accessible and portable.

× that also makes me umm, buy fewer useless stuff.

✓ that also makes me umm, buy fewer useless things.

The word 'stuff' is uncountable, so 'fewer' should not be used with it. Instead, use 'things' which is countable and fits with 'fewer'. In English, 'fewer' is used with countable nouns, while 'less' is used with uncountable nouns.

× I think A to do list is very important because sometimes you know brains cannot really store so much thing so you have to write them down and then do them 1 by 1.

✓ I think a to-do list is very important because sometimes you know brains cannot really store so many things so you have to write them down and then do them one by one.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'so much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'things' is countable, so 'so many' is correct. Additionally, '1 by 1' is better expressed as 'one by one' in formal English.

× I think some people think that making a list may make them stressed because it feels like that they have a lot of stuff to do and they may not have that enough time.

✓ I think some people think that making a list may make them stressed because it feels like they have a lot of stuff to do and they may not have enough time.

The phrase 'like that they have' is incorrect; 'like they have' is the correct form. Also, 'that enough time' is incorrect; it should be 'enough time' without 'that'. These corrections improve the naturalness and grammatical correctness of the sentence.

× When I was young, I prefer to make a list on paper because I bought a lot of stationeries and memos, but nowadays I think are definitely more convenient because it is more accessible and easy to carry.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to make a list on paper because I bought a lot of stationery and memos, but nowadays I think lists on my phone are definitely more convenient because they are more accessible and easy to carry.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'When I was young'. 'Stationeries' is incorrect; 'stationery' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. The phrase 'I think are definitely more convenient' is incomplete; specifying 'lists on my phone' and using 'they are' clarifies the subject and verb agreement.