列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和不自然的用法。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

範例: I don't always make a shopping list because I usually know exactly what I need. Also, I find making a list a bit inconvenient sometimes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且有口语填充词影响流畅度。建议练习完整表达观点，减少口语填充词，注意语法和句子完整性。

範例: I sometimes make a list for work, especially when I have important meetings coming up. It helps me remember the key points I need to discuss.

建議: 回答表达混乱，逻辑不清晰，重复且语法错误较多。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达原因，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient. Also, they trust their good memory to remember tasks without writing them down.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达观点，注意句子结构和语法，避免重复。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can check my lists anytime and anywhere.

× Well, I don't always make a list when I'm going to shop 'cause I exactly know what I want to want.

✓ Well, I don't always make a list when I'm going shopping 'cause I exactly know what I want.

这里的动词短语“going to shop”应改为“going shopping”，因为动词后接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作。

× I do make a list sometimes, umm especially when I have an important meetings umm the next day or next week.

✓ I do make a list sometimes, umm especially when I have important meetings umm the next day or next week.

“an important meetings”中“meetings”为复数，前面不应使用不定冠词“an”，应去掉“an”或改为单数形式。

× It helps me to remember the items. On the meetings and the.

✓ It helps me to remember the items in the meetings and so on.

介词“on the meetings”用法不当，正确应为“in the meetings”，表示在会议中。

× Well, maybe some people don't want to make a list 'cause it's inconvenient to make a list sometimes and they have confidence that they can't remember the things they they want to do and they have a good memory they have.

✓ Well, maybe some people don't want to make a list 'cause it's inconvenient sometimes and they are confident that they can remember the things they want to do because they have a good memory.

句子中连接词使用混乱，且表达不清晰，应调整连接词和句子结构，使意思明确。

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy way to make a list and I always take my phone with me and I can't I I can't catch my lists anywhere and anytime.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's a very convenient and easy way to make a list and I always take my phone with me so I can access my lists anywhere and anytime.

“catch my lists”用法错误，应使用“access my lists”表示访问列表；此外，缺少冠词“a”修饰“very convenient and easy way”。