列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "I don't need a lease" which should be "I don't need a list." Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: I usually go to the supermarket every week to buy groceries. Since I often buy the same items, I don't need to make a list because I have a good memory and know what to buy.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using better linking words and clearer sentence structure. For example, use "so" instead of "because" twice in one sentence. Also, try to add a little more detail to support your opinion.

範例: I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep my job flexible. So, when unexpected situations happen, I can easily decide what to do first.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. For example, "making this make you feel stressful the least" is confusing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and restrictive. For spontaneous people, lists force them to do tasks in order, so they prefer to handle tasks freely.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting some phrases and adding linking words. For example, "do the sum up in the phone" is unclear; you can say "update the list on the phone." Also, try to be more specific about the advantages.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily update my list and share it with my family members, like my husband or children.

× Every week I go to the supermarket to buy groceries and over the time I buy the same things so I don't need a lease because I have a good memory and I know what I need to buy.

✓ Every week I go to the supermarket to buy groceries and over time I buy the same things so I don't need a list because I have a good memory and I know what I need to buy.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects meaning. Also, 'over the time' should be 'over time' as the phrase means gradually or as time passes.

× I think making this make you feel stressful the least is so restrictive, like forcing you have to do things in order.

✓ I think making this makes you feel stressed at least; it is so restrictive, like forcing you to do things in order.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'making this' (third person singular issue). Also, 'stressful' should be 'stressed' to correctly describe the feeling experienced by a person. The phrase 'the least' is unclear and replaced with 'at least' for clarity. 'Forcing you have to do' should be 'forcing you to do' to use the correct infinitive form after 'forcing'.

× So for spontaneous people, they prefer to handle the task by themselves.

✓ So spontaneous people prefer to handle the tasks by themselves.

The phrase 'for spontaneous people, they' is redundant; either 'for spontaneous people' or 'they' should be used, not both. Also, 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' to match the general meaning. 'By themselves' is correct here.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because you bring your phone wherever you go and do the sum up in the phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because you can bring your phone wherever you go and do the sum up on the phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone; 'on the phone' is the correct phrase. Also, adding 'can' clarifies ability. 'Sum up' is informal but acceptable here.

× You can easily share your list with someone in your family like your husband, your kid.

✓ You can easily share your list with someone in your family like your husband or your kids.

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' when referring generally to children. Also, 'like' is acceptable but 'or' is better to indicate alternatives. This correction improves clarity and grammatical number agreement.