列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I don't buy very much things」は「I don't buy many things」が正しいです。また、文のつながりが不自然なので、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I don't buy many things, so I can easily remember what I need.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。例えば、「When I my work is going to complicate it」は不自然で、「When my work becomes complicated」などに直す必要があります。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。

範例: Yes, I do. When my work becomes complicated, I usually make a list to organize my tasks, and it helps me work more efficiently.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「they don't like to making lists」は「they don't like making lists」が正しいです。また、「they tend to feel the exciting when they go to shop」は意味が不明瞭なので、より具体的で自然な表現にしましょう。

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it feels boring and they prefer the excitement of shopping without a plan.

建議: 回答は理解できますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「I prefer to use smartphone uh」は「I prefer to use my smartphone」が自然です。また、「it is much comfortable」は「it is much more convenient」などの表現が適切です。

範例: I prefer to use my smartphone to make lists because it's more convenient than using paper and pen.

× I don't buy very much things so it's enough to only memorize it.

✓ I don't buy very many things so it's enough to only memorize it.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'things'. Therefore, 'many' is correct here.

× When I my work is going to complicate it, I need to, uh, restore the work.

✓ When my work is going to get complicated, I need to, uh, organize the work.

The phrase 'going to complicate it' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'going to get complicated'. Also, 'restore the work' is unclear; 'organize the work' fits better in this context.

× When I go to the shop I don't buy very much things so it's enough to only memorize it.

✓ When I go to the shop I don't buy very many things so it's enough to only memorize them.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'things'.

× I prefer to use smartphone uh.

✓ I prefer to use a smartphone, uh.

The noun 'smartphone' requires an article 'a' when singular and countable.

× In my opinion, they don't like to making lists because it's making list is very dull and not so fun, so they tend to feel the exciting when they go to shop.

✓ In my opinion, they don't like making lists because making lists is very dull and not very fun, so they tend to feel excited when they go shopping.

The phrase 'don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'. 'It's making list' should be 'making lists'. 'Feel the exciting' should be 'feel excited'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping'.

× When I if I use the paper, I need to have a pen with the paper, so it is much comfortable to use my phone when I make a list.

✓ If I use paper, I need to have a pen with it, so it is much more comfortable to use my phone when I make a list.

'When I if I use the paper' is redundant; 'If I use paper' is correct. 'With the paper' should be 'with it' to avoid repetition. 'Much comfortable' should be 'much more comfortable'.