列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: この回答は文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、"my mother often make a list when she shop"は"my mother often makes a list when she shops"とするべきです。また、"all other age is unforgettable to what them really need to buy"の部分は意味が不明瞭なので、具体的で簡潔な表現に直しましょう。自然な英語で短く答える練習をしてください。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. However, my mother often makes one because she tends to forget what she needs to buy.

建議: 回答が不完全で、意味が伝わりにくいです。"ultimate lists always makes me feel"の部分は文法的にも意味的にも不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明しましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習も必要です。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete. It makes me feel organized and less stressed.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。"don't have custom to relying on making this"は"don't have the habit of relying on lists"などに直す必要があります。また、理由を明確にし、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、表現が不自然です。"I totally prefer make a list"は"I totally prefer making a list"に直しましょう。また、理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べることが大切です。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember my tasks better.

× No I don't really make a list when I'm shopping but my mother often make a list when she shop because all other age is unforgettable to what them really need to buy.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I'm shopping but my mother often makes a list when she shops because all other age is unforgettable to what they really need to buy.

The verbs 'make' and 'shop' need to be in the third person singular form 'makes' and 'shops' to agree with the singular subject 'my mother' and 'she'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× No I don't really make a list when I'm shopping but my mother often make a list when she shop because all other age is unforgettable to what them really need to buy.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I'm shopping but my mother often makes a list when she shops because all other age is unforgettable to what they really need to buy.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here; it should be 'they' as the subject of the clause. Using the correct subject pronoun is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I think so, because to make a list reminds you to what really you need to do next, and ultimate lists always makes me feel. Reminds me what?

✓ Yes, I think so, because making a list reminds you of what you really need to do next, and ultimate lists always make me feel... Reminds me what?

The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'. Also, 'to make a list reminds you to' is awkward; 'making a list reminds you of' is more natural. Correct verb forms and prepositions improve clarity.

× Yes, I think so, because to make a list reminds you to what really you need to do next, and ultimate lists always makes me feel. Reminds me what?

✓ Yes, I think so, because making a list reminds you of what you really need to do next, and ultimate lists always make me feel... Reminds me what?

The phrase 'reminds you to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' after 'reminds you'. Prepositions are important to convey the correct relationship between words.

× Hmm, because of I think many people don't have custom to relying on making this because there are lots of people tend to do something when they come up with.

✓ Hmm, because I think many people don't have the custom of relying on making lists because many people tend to do something when they come up with it.

The phrase 'because of I think' is incorrect; 'because I think' is correct. Also, 'custom to relying' should be 'custom of relying'. Pronouns and prepositions must be used correctly to maintain grammatical accuracy.

× Hmm, because of I think many people don't have custom to relying on making this because there are lots of people tend to do something when they come up with.

✓ Hmm, because I think many people don't have the custom of relying on making lists because many people tend to do something when they come up with it.

The preposition 'to' after 'custom' is incorrect; it should be 'of'. Also, 'come up with' requires an object, so 'it' is added. Correct preposition and object usage are necessary for clarity.

× I totally prefer make a list on paper because I don't know why they I prefer it, but I think writing by my hand is reminds me of the what I really need to do.

✓ I totally prefer to make a list on paper because I don't know why, but I think writing by hand reminds me of what I really need to do.

The verb 'make' should be 'to make' after 'prefer'. The phrase 'is reminds me' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me'. Also, 'writing by my hand' is better as 'writing by hand'. These corrections improve verb form and phrase usage.

× I totally prefer make a list on paper because I don't know why they I prefer it, but I think writing by my hand is reminds me of the what I really need to do.

✓ I totally prefer to make a list on paper because I don't know why, but I think writing by hand reminds me of what I really need to do.

The phrase 'they I prefer it' is incorrect and confusing; it should be removed for clarity. Pronouns must be used correctly to avoid confusion.

× So I prefer make at least some paper.

✓ So I prefer to make at least some lists on paper.

The verb 'make' should be 'to make' after 'prefer'. Also, 'some paper' is unclear; 'some lists on paper' fits the context better. Correct verb form and noun usage improve clarity.