列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "reduce mistake" should be "reduce mistakes" or "reduce errors." Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent, such as "because" and "so." Keep your sentences concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I often make a list when I go to a local supermarket because it helps me remember what to buy and reduces mistakes.

建議: There are some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "what my boss tell me" should be "what my boss tells me." Also, "making a release" seems incorrect; you probably meant "making a list." Try to use linking words like "because" and "also" properly and avoid mistakes to improve clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list at work because it helps me remember what my boss tells me. Also, making a list improves my productivity.

建議: Your answer is a bit long and slightly confusing. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words like "because" and "or." Also, use correct articles and plural forms, for example, "using an app or notes." Avoid repeating "because" twice in one sentence.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they can easily remember information, or they prefer using apps or notes to avoid spending too much time and effort.

建議: There are some grammatical errors such as missing "to" in "prefer to make a list" and an incomplete sentence ending with "and." Try to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to write down what someone tells me, and I can access it anytime and anywhere.

× it can help reduce mistake

✓ it can help reduce mistakes

The noun 'mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' because it refers to multiple possible errors, not just one. In English, when talking about errors in general, the plural form is used.

× what my boss tell me

✓ what my boss tells me

The verb 'tell' must agree with the singular subject 'my boss'. In the third person singular present tense, verbs take an -s ending, so 'tell' becomes 'tells'.

× making a release can improve my productivity

✓ making a list can improve my productivity

The word 'release' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but since 'release' is singular and does not fit the context, it should be corrected to 'list'.

× by using app or note

✓ by using an app or a note

The nouns 'app' and 'note' require articles 'an' and 'a' respectively when used in this context. Omitting articles before singular countable nouns is incorrect.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it is easy to write down what someone tells me and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to write down what someone tells me.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, the sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' which should be removed for correct sentence structure.