列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并直接回答问题。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to see what's available at the market and buy what I need on the spot.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before work because it helps me organize my tasks for the day. This way, I can work more efficiently and feel satisfied after completing everything.

建議: 回答不够具体且表达混乱，建议明确观点并提供具体原因，避免重复。

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. Others may prefer to keep their plans in mind rather than writing them down.

建議: 回答较为自然，但有重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper which I might forget to bring.

× No I didn't.

✓ No, I don't.

这里的问题是时态错误。问题是询问你是否通常列购物清单，使用一般现在时，因此回答也应使用一般现在时。"didn't"是过去时，应该用"don't"表示习惯性动作。

× I haven't made a list before.

✓ I haven't made a list before.

这句话语法正确，符合现在完成时的用法，表示到目前为止没有做过某事。

× I usually go to the market to see what they have and and to try and to buy the food or something when I want what I want.

✓ I usually go to the market to see what they have and to try to buy the food or something when I want something.

这里重复使用了"and"，且"try and to buy"结构不正确，应该用"try to buy"。此外，"when I want what I want"表达重复且不自然，改为"when I want something"更简洁。

× So always it is work and make me feel enjoyable after after I.

✓ So it always works and makes me feel happy afterwards.

"it is work"应为"it works"，主谓一致错误；"make me feel enjoyable"中"enjoyable"是形容词，应该用"happy"或"enjoying"来表达感受；"after after I"不完整且重复，应改为"afterwards"。

× But however some people may make a list on their minds, so we don't know if they write write down, but I think many people always make.

✓ However, some people may make a list in their minds, so we don't know if they write it down, but I think many people always do.

"But however"重复使用转折词，应去掉"But"；"make a list on their minds"应为"make a list in their minds"；"write write down"重复，应改为"write it down"；句尾"many people always make"缺少宾语，改为"many people always do"。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is very convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is very convenient.

这句话语法正确，"make a list on my phone"中介词使用正确。

× Moreover, sometimes we may forget to forget to take a paper, but nowadays we couldn't.

✓ Moreover, sometimes we may forget to take a paper, but nowadays we don't.

"forget to forget to"重复错误，应去掉一个"forget to"；"nowadays we couldn't"时态错误，应该用一般现在时"we don't"表示现在的情况。

× We must not forget to take our phones.

✓ We must not forget to take our phones.

这句话语法正确，情态动词使用恰当。