列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure bhalo korte hobe. Apnar answer ta onek boro ar kichu part redundant. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje ar shothik vabe banate, ar kichu linking word use korun jate answer ta natural lage.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. It helps me to buy only the necessary items and saves my time because I don't have to think about what to buy while shopping.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu incomplete sentence ache ar kichu repetition. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo complete korte ar linking word use korte jate answer ta fluent lage. Apni aro specific example dite paren jate answer ta bhalo hoy.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me to organize my tasks clearly, so I can focus better and save time. For example, yesterday I completed all my tasks on time because of my list.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache ar apni onek vague kotha bolchen. Apni chesta korun aro specific reasons dite ar sentence gulo shothik vabe banate. Linking word use korle answer ta aro bhalo hobe.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or they prefer to work spontaneously. Also, some may not be good at managing their time, so they don't see the benefit of lists.

建議: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu sentence onek boro ar repetitive. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo chhoto ar clear korte, ar kichu linking word use korun jate answer ta natural lage.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's convenient to check my list anytime without carrying extra paper.

× Yes, I make a list before I go for shopping so that I can easily pick things that is necessary for me that in that time and it saves my time by looking at the lists so that I don't have to.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping so that I can easily pick things that are necessary for me at that time and it saves my time by looking at the list so that I don't have to.

The word 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'Lists' should be singular 'list' to match the earlier mention. 'That in that time' is unclear and corrected to 'at that time' for proper preposition use.

× Yes, I make a list before I go for shopping so that I can easily pick things that is necessary for me that in that time and it saves my time by looking at the lists so that I don't have to.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping so that I can easily pick things that are necessary for me at that time and it saves my time by looking at the list so that I don't have to.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted, so it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'that in that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at that time'.

× Some people don't like making list, maybe because they are too lazy to do preparations before starting their work and they're not really time managing people.

✓ Some people don't like making lists, maybe because they are too lazy to do preparations before starting their work and they're not really time-managing people.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because 'some people' implies multiple instances. Also, 'time managing' should be hyphenated as 'time-managing' to function as a compound adjective.

× I prefer making list on my phone because usually I don't carry papers with me all the time, but my phone is all time there with me so it is really easy to make a list on my phone so that I can just pick it up and have a look on it.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because usually I don't carry papers with me all the time, but my phone is always with me so it is really easy to make a list on my phone so that I can just pick it up and have a look at it.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. The phrase 'all time there with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'always with me'. Also, 'have a look on it' should be 'have a look at it' because the correct preposition with 'look' is 'at'.

× By seeing the list I made I can easily understand the tasks of the day and it saves my time and it helps me to concentrate on the.

✓ By seeing the list I made, I can easily understand the tasks of the day and it saves my time and it helps me to concentrate on them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'concentrate on the.' It should be 'concentrate on them' to refer back to 'tasks', which is plural. This corrects the singular/plural reference and completes the sentence meaningfully.