列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'make knees' instead of 'make lists'. Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, you could say: 'Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because I tend to forget things otherwise.'

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because I tend to forget things otherwise. It's very convenient and helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'Yes, I make lists at work because I care for many patients who take different medications. Therefore, lists help me administer their drugs on time.'

範例: Yes, I make lists at work because I care for many patients who take different medications. Therefore, lists help me administer their drugs on time and ensure nothing is missed.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'and it's'. For example, 'Some people believe they have an excellent memory, like an elephant, so they think making lists is a waste of time and inefficient.'

範例: Some people believe they have an excellent memory, like an elephant, so they think making lists is a waste of time and inefficient.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more environmentally friendly. Using paper requires cutting down trees, so digital lists help reduce waste.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more environmentally friendly. Using paper requires cutting down trees, so digital lists help reduce waste.

× Yes, it's really important for me to make knees and I storing notes in my cell phones.

✓ Yes, it's really important for me to make notes and I store notes in my cell phone.

The phrase 'I storing notes' is incorrect because after 'I' the base form of the verb or the correct tense should be used. Here, 'store' is the correct present tense verb form. Also, 'make knees' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'make notes'. Additionally, 'cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' to match the context.

× I prefer to make list, otherwise I forget to buy lots of things.

✓ I prefer to make a list, otherwise I forget to buy lots of things.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, since I work as a nurse, I have to make a list because I have lots of patient.

✓ Yes, since I work as a nurse, I have to make a list because I have lots of patients.

The word 'patient' is countable and plural here, so it should be 'patients' to agree with 'lots of', which indicates more than one.

× It's really important for us to have least because we can do them on time and it's.

✓ It's really important for us to have a list because we can do them on time.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' here. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and it's.' which is incomplete and should be omitted or completed for clarity.

× They believe that they have a memory like an elephant, so they cannot forget any items and it's a waste of time when they want to make list and it's not really efficient for them.

✓ They believe that they have a memory like an elephant, so they cannot forget any items and it's a waste of time when they want to make a list and it's not really efficient for them.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Nowadays, since environmental issues is really important for me, I prefer to make a list on my cell phones because when we want to write on paper, we have to use paper.

✓ Nowadays, since environmental issues are really important for me, I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because when we want to write on paper, we have to use paper.

The subject 'environmental issues' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' to match the context.