列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Uh, actually I do not have to make a list when I go to shopping because it depends on, uh, the day, the shop, what they have. So I will make a plan after I go shopping or while I go shopping.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I tried to make a list for my work, but after half a year I realized that uh, no need to making a list because I have a list on my mind that is more clear.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult to decide what tasks to include or exclude. Also, it depends on their mood or situation. Sometimes they prefer to be spontaneous rather than follow a strict plan. For example, if they feel overwhelmed, making a list might seem stressful instead of helpful.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is a, it's easy to access anytime, anywhere and it always belongs to me. If I write it in a paper it it might be lost.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答はやや冗長で、言い淀みが多いです。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、直接的に質問に答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to decide what to buy based on what's available that day."のように。
範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to decide what to buy based on what's available that day. This way, I can be flexible and choose fresh or seasonal items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。"no need to making"は誤りで、"no need to make"が正しいです。また、答えはもう少し明確に構成しましょう。
範例: I tried making lists for my work, but after six months, I realized I don't need them because I keep everything organized in my mind more clearly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答はよく構成されており、理由や例も含まれています。ただし、より自然な表現と簡潔さを意識するとさらに良くなります。例えば、"Some people dislike making lists because it can be hard to decide what to include, and they prefer spontaneity."のように。
範例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be hard to decide what to include, and they prefer spontaneity. For instance, when they feel stressed, making a list might add pressure instead of helping.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 75.0建議: 答えは理解できますが、繰り返しや言い淀みがあり、文法ミスもあります。"in a paper"は"on paper"が正しいです。より流暢で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and they won't get lost like paper lists might.
文法
× I tried to make a list for my work, but after half a year I realized that uh, no need to making a list because I have a list on my mind that is more clear.
✓ I tried to make a list for my work, but after half a year I realized that uh, there is no need to make a list because I have a list on my mind that is clearer.
The phrase 'no need to making a list' is incorrect because after 'need to' the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'more clear' should be 'clearer' to correctly use the comparative adjective form.
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