列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は基本的な内容を含んでいますが、言い淀みや繰り返しがあり、文の構造がやや不自然です。より明確で流暢な表現を心がけ、冗長な部分を省き、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping. I usually decide on a budget first, then list the items I need to buy within that budget.

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えており、理由も述べていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然で正確な英語表現を目指しましょう。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can work more efficiently.

建議: 回答に繰り返しや言い淀みが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。より簡潔で明確な表現を使い、具体例をわかりやすく述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to decide what to do spontaneously. For example, they might want to do tasks only when they feel motivated.

建議: 回答は理由を述べていますが、言い淀みや不自然な接続が見られます。接続詞を適切に使い、より流暢で論理的な説明を心がけましょう。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to edit them later. In contrast, lists on paper are harder to change once written.

× I usually make umm decide the budget before I go shopping and decide what to buy and make the list for that that suits the budget.

✓ I usually decide the budget before I go shopping and decide what to buy and make the list that suits the budget.

The phrase 'make umm decide' is incorrect because 'make' should not be followed by the base verb 'decide' without 'to'. The correct form is to use 'decide' directly here. Also, 'make the list for that that suits the budget' is awkward; it should be 'make the list that suits the budget.' This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, by listing what to do and priority lists, it makes me do my work more efficient.

✓ For example, by listing what to do and priority tasks, it helps me do my work more efficiently.

The phrase 'priority lists' is incorrect here because the intended meaning is likely 'priority tasks' or 'priorities.' Also, 'makes me do my work more efficient' is incorrect; 'efficient' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'efficiently' to modify the verb 'do.' This correction fixes quantifier misuse and adverb usage.

× Umm, for example, some people says that say that they want to do the task when they feel they want to do that.

✓ Umm, for example, some people say that they want to do the task when they feel like doing it.

The verb 'says' does not agree with the plural subject 'some people'; it should be 'say.' Also, the phrase 'say that say that' is redundant and incorrect. The phrase 'when they feel they want to do that' is awkward; 'when they feel like doing it' is more natural. This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and pronoun clarity.

× While if we make it on paper, it is really hard to change that after making it.

✓ While if we make it on paper, it is really hard to change it after making it.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to 'the list'; it should be 'it' to maintain consistency and clarity. Using 'it' correctly refers back to the list mentioned earlier. This correction improves pronoun usage.