列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and coherent. For example, instead of 'helps me stay focused', you could say 'enables me to concentrate better'. Also, try to avoid redundancy like 'especially when I'm in a rut or on a budget' which could be combined more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list before heading to the store because it enables me to concentrate better and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items, particularly when I'm trying to save money or feeling unmotivated.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I make to do lists every day to keep track of my lectures, duties, and assignments' and 'This method works well because it provides a clear plan and helps me remember urgent tasks.'

範例: Absolutely. As a medical student, I make to-do lists every day to keep track of my lectures, duties, and assignments. This method works well because it provides a clear plan and helps me remember urgent tasks.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. To improve, clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. For example, say 'Some people find lists restrictive because they prefer a spontaneous lifestyle' and 'They might also feel that making lists is time-consuming or unnecessary, especially if they can remember things without writing them down.'

範例: Some people find lists restrictive because they prefer a spontaneous lifestyle. They might also feel that making lists is time-consuming or unnecessary, especially if they can remember things without writing them down.

建議: Your answer is natural, clear, and well-structured. To enhance it further, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as 'Moreover' or 'In addition'.

範例: I prefer using my phone because it's always with me and I can update the list anytime. Moreover, digital lists are easier to edit, and I can set reminders, which is very useful during my busy hospital shifts.

× I make to do lists every day to keep track of my lectures, what duties and assignments.

✓ I make to-do lists every day to keep track of my lectures, duties, and assignments.

The phrase 'what duties and assignments' is incorrect because 'what' is unnecessary and disrupts the list structure. The correct form is to list the items directly separated by commas. Also, 'to do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists' to function as a compound adjective.

× It works well because it gives me a clear plan and prevents me from forgetting urgent task.

✓ It works well because it gives me a clear plan and prevents me from forgetting urgent tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple urgent tasks that might be forgotten. Using the singular form here is incorrect as the context implies more than one task.

× Some people find less restrictive because they prefer a spontaneous lifestyle.

✓ Some people find it less restrictive because they prefer a spontaneous lifestyle.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'find' to correctly link the object of the verb. Without 'it', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× They might also feel that making this is time consuming or unnecessary, especially if they can remember tags without writing them down.

✓ They might also feel that making lists is time-consuming or unnecessary, especially if they can remember tasks without writing them down.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and unclear; it should be replaced with 'lists' to specify what is being referred to. Also, 'tags' is incorrect in this context and should be 'tasks'. Additionally, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer using my phone because it's always with me and I can update the list anytime.

✓ I prefer using my phone because it's always with me and I can update the list anytime.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Digital lists are also easier to edit and I can set reminders which is very useful during my busy hospital shifts.

✓ Digital lists are also easier to edit and I can set reminders which are very useful during my busy hospital shifts.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'reminders' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.