列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“the stuffs”应为“the items”或“things”，句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇。

範例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because we go to the supermarket every weekend to buy items for the next five or six days.

建議: 回答中表达不够流畅，词汇使用不准确，如“undo list”不常用，建议使用更自然的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make different lists for my work, such as a to-do list, a planning list, and an emergency tasks list. These help me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用更具体的原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Some people might not like making lists because they don't find them useful in their daily work, or they may not know how to create an effective list.

建議: 回答中有重复词语和表达不够自然，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

範例: I prefer to write my lists on sticky notes and stick them on my computer screen so I can easily see them.

× Ah yes, I do it very often because we go to the supermarket every weekend and purchase the stuffs for five or six days using.

✓ Ah yes, I do it very often because we go to the supermarket every weekend and purchase the stuff for five or six days' use.

“stuffs”是不可数名词“stuff”的错误复数形式，应使用单数形式。并且“for five or six days using”表达不自然，改为“for five or six days' use”更准确。

× Yes, I do make lists on my work such as the undo list, the planning To Do List and the emergency works list.

✓ Yes, I do make lists for my work such as the undo list, the planning To Do List and the emergency work list.

“make lists on my work”中介词“on”用错，应使用“for”表示“为……制作列表”。“emergency works list”中“works”应为不可数名词“work”。

× Yes, I do make lists on my work such as the undo list, the planning To Do List and the emergency works list.

✓ Yes, I do make lists for my work such as the undo list, the planning To Do List and the emergency work list.

“emergency works list”中的“works”应为不可数名词“work”，不应使用复数形式。

× Maybe they don't think it is useful in their daily work, or maybe they think or maybe they don't have ideas about how to make a good list.

✓ Maybe they don't think it is useful in their daily work, or maybe they don't have ideas about how to make a good list.

句中“or maybe they think or maybe they don't have ideas”重复且多余，应删去多余的“or maybe they think”。

× I prefer to make the list on the on the stick paper and then and then stick it on my computer screen.

✓ I prefer to make the list on the sticky paper and then stick it on my computer screen.

“stick paper”应为“sticky paper”，表示“粘性的纸”。“on the on the”重复，应删除多余部分。