列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually shop spontaneously and buy what catches my eye. However, I sometimes make a list if I need to buy many things to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但句子重复且表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词，避免重复，表达更自然。

範例: Sometimes I make a list when I have many tasks to finish in one day because it helps me remember less important things that I might forget while focusing on one task.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体原因和细节。建议直接回答问题，提供具体原因，并用连接词连接句子。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to update. Also, I often lose my handwritten notes, so using my phone helps me stay organized.

× I always shop spontaneously and saying what caught my eyes.

✓ I always shop spontaneously and say what catches my eyes.

这里的动词需要与主语保持一致，且两个动作是并列关系，应使用动词原形或第三人称单数形式。原句中'saying'形式错误，应改为'say'。

× I always remember what I need to buy and making a list of views.

✓ I always remember what I need to buy and make a list of views.

并列动词应保持一致，'making'应改为'make'。

× Too strictly for me and I enjoy it.

✓ It's too strict for me and I enjoy it.

'Too strictly'是副词形式，需改为形容词'strict'，并且句子缺少主语和谓语。

× Sometimes I make a list when I when there are so many tasks to finish in one day, I tend to forget less important things when I focus on one task.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when there are so many tasks to finish in one day; I tend to forget less important things when I focus on one task.

句子中重复出现'when I'，且句子结构混乱，应删除多余部分并用分号分隔两个独立句子。

× So making a list really helps me to remember anything, so I think.

✓ So making a list really helps me remember anything, I think.

'helps me to remember'中的'to'可以省略，且句尾的'so'多余，应删除。

× As I mentioned above, in some cases I don't like make a list because I feel making a list feel more attractive and unrelaxed.

✓ As I mentioned above, in some cases I don't like to make a list because I feel making a list feels less attractive and stressful.

'like make'应为'like to make'，'feel more attractive and unrelaxed'表达不准确，改为'feels less attractive and stressful'更符合语境。

× For me, I tend to I tend to buy or experience something spontaneously and.

✓ For me, I tend to buy or experience something spontaneously.

句子中重复'I tend to'且句尾不完整，应删除重复部分并补全句子。

× I prefer to I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is a more convenient for me for it as it is easy to update and help me to stay organized efficiently.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is more convenient for me as it is easy to update and helps me stay organized efficiently.

句子中重复'I prefer to'，'a more convenient'应去掉冠词'a'，'help'应改为'helps'以符合主谓一致。

× I always missing my write down notes so.

✓ I always miss writing down my notes, so.

'always missing'时态错误，应为一般现在时'miss'，'write down notes'应改为'writing down my notes'。