列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。例えば、「for example when my friend」の部分は意味が不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を使い、文を完結させることが重要です。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop, but sometimes I do if I am shopping with a friend to make sure we don't forget anything.

建議: 回答は簡潔ですが、文法と表現が不自然です。「I do it」よりも「Yes, I usually make a list for my work」が適切です。また、理由や効果を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

建議: 回答が意味不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、自然な英語で説明する練習が必要です。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom or they prefer to remember things naturally.

建議: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。比較を明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べることが大切です。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper lists.

× Sometimes I will make a list, for example when my friend.

✓ Sometimes I will make a list, for example, when I go shopping with my friend.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear because it lacks a verb or action after 'when my friend'. Adding 'I go shopping with my friend' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I do it. I usually make a list for my work and then I think it is working.

✓ I do it. I usually make a list for my work and then I think it works.

The phrase 'it is working' is incorrect in this context because the speaker is referring to a habitual action or general truth. The simple present tense 'it works' is appropriate here.

× 'Cause some people think it is not good for themselves. They don't say that. So already comfortable.

✓ Because some people think it is not good for them. They don't say that because they are already comfortable.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Cause' should be 'Because' for formal speech. 'For themselves' is better as 'for them'. The last sentence lacks a subject and verb; adding 'because they are' clarifies the meaning.

× Well for making this on my phone because it is most uncomfortable for more than paper to write down and then a lot of people using a phone on certain life so they can use more easily.

✓ Well, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper, and many people use phones in their daily lives, so they can use it more easily.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Most uncomfortable for more than paper' should be 'more convenient than writing on paper'. 'Using a phone on certain life' is unclear; 'use phones in their daily lives' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.