列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like 'daily daily' and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. For example, mention why you choose those items and how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy essential items like vegetables, fruits, and pulses, which are important for my healthy diet.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar, for example, 'when I working' should be 'when I am working'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.

範例: Yes, I always make a work list, but often I cannot follow it because my manager assigns urgent tasks that require immediate attention.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting it with specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar and vocabulary for clarity.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility and prevents them from discovering better options while shopping or working.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing filler words like 'uh' and using more natural expressions. Also, explain briefly why using the phone is helpful and handy.

範例: Since we live in a technological world, I prefer making my lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry when I go shopping.

× I needed certain vegetables, fruits and as well pulses for my healthy eating.

✓ I need certain vegetables, fruits and also pulses for my healthy eating.

The sentence is describing a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'need' instead of past tense 'needed'.

× Yes, I always make a list when I working, but however, that list is never followed because sometimes or the other my manager comes up with an excessive emergency uh, uh, work and I have to work on that particular emergent urgent work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I am working, but however, that list is never followed because sometimes or the other my manager comes up with an excessive emergency uh, uh, work and I have to work on that particular emergent urgent work.

After 'when', a verb in the -ing form needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly: 'I am working' instead of 'I working'.

× One of the reason people don't make list because they think that you know making list will make them narrow down their way of working or way of buying some stuff and it will not help them to get something better which is around and I believe although people don't make list but.

✓ One of the reasons people don't make lists is because they think that you know making a list will narrow down their way of working or way of buying some stuff and it will not help them to get something better which is around and I believe although people don't make lists but.

The phrase 'One of the reason' should be 'One of the reasons' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' or 'make a list' to agree in number. The verb 'is' is needed after the subject 'One of the reasons'.

× I prefer to make my list over my phone because it will be very helpful when I go out and it's very handy at the same time.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because it will be very helpful when I go out and it's very handy at the same time.

The correct preposition to use with 'phone' in this context is 'on' not 'over'. We say 'make a list on my phone'.