列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и немного неестественные выражения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные предлоги и более естественные фразы, например, 'helps me to organize my shopping' вместо 'helps me for organize it'. Также избегайте использования 'you' в ответе, говорите о себе.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to organize my purchases and remember what I need to buy.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать связующие слова для плавности, например, 'especially for my studies because it helps me organize my tasks'. Также избегайте фрагментов без глаголов и используйте правильные формы глаголов.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially for my studies, because they help me organize my tasks. For example, I write down deadlines, tests, and homework, which helps me remember everything.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более точные фразы, например, 'it takes a lot of time' вместо 'it's make a lot of time'. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Maybe some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time, and they prefer to remember things without writing them down.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит ошибки в использовании предлогов и артиклей. Рекомендуется разделить ответ на два предложения, использовать правильные предлоги и артикли, а также избегать повторов.

範例: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone. For example, I use paper lists when I go shopping, but I use my phone to keep track of deadlines and mock tests for my studies.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go to shop because at least it helps me for organize it and you remember what you need to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because at least it helps me organize it and remember what I need to buy.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, 'helps me for organize it' should be 'helps me organize it' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'for'. Additionally, 'you remember' should be 'I remember' to maintain the first person perspective.

× Oh yes, I make a list for my work and especially for my study because make a list, it helps me to organize it.

✓ Oh yes, I make a list for my work and especially for my study because making a list helps me to organize it.

The phrase 'because make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'because making a list' using the gerund form to function as a noun in this context.

× And in the list I can write about deadlines, about my test and the homework that I need to.

✓ And in the list, I can write about deadlines, my tests, and the homework that I need to do.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'do' at the end to complete the meaning. Also, 'my test' should be plural 'my tests' to match the context of multiple deadlines and homework.

× And it's help me remember.

✓ And it helps me remember.

'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help' to agree in number.

× Maybe some people don't like making list because it's make a lot of time and they prefer just remember it, don't write it down.

✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and they prefer just to remember it, not write it down.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'It's make' is incorrect; it should be 'it takes' to express duration. Also, 'prefer just remember it' should be 'prefer just to remember it' to use the infinitive form after 'prefer'. 'Don't write it down' is better as 'not write it down' to parallel the infinitive structure.

× I prefer to make a list in both of types and in a paper any phone because when I go to shopping or shop, I make a list on my on the paper and I make a list on phone when I have deadlines or mock test and something like that, like a study.

✓ I prefer to make a list using both types, on paper and on my phone, because when I go shopping, I make a list on paper, and I make a list on my phone when I have deadlines, mock tests, or something like that, like studying.

The phrase 'in both of types' is incorrect; it should be 'using both types'. 'In a paper any phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper and on my phone' because we use 'on' with paper and phone lists. 'Go to shopping or shop' should be 'go shopping'. 'Make a list on my on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list on paper'. 'Mock test' should be plural 'mock tests' to match the context. 'Like a study' should be 'like studying' using the gerund form.