列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve by adding a linking phrase and a more specific example to make it more natural and engaging. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy a lot of things. For instance, last weekend I wrote down everything I needed for a family barbecue, which helped me shop quickly and not forget anything important.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains hesitations and a confusing phrase at the end. To improve, try to speak more confidently, avoid filler words like 'uh', and clarify your points with linking words. Also, ensure your answer is complete and relevant without unrelated phrases.

範例: Yes, I usually prepare a to-do list at the start of the day because it helps me organise my tasks and manage my time more effectively. By prioritising the most important tasks, I can reduce stress and maintain focus throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like 'making this' and be more specific.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too time-consuming, and others believe they can remember everything without writing it down. Additionally, some prefer to be spontaneous instead of following a strict plan.

建議: Your answer is good but contains a small error ('organize my test' instead of 'tasks') and could benefit from better linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise.

範例: I prefer making a to-do list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient to carry around. Moreover, I don't have to worry about losing paper lists, and I can easily organise my tasks using apps that help me manage my time more efficiently.

× I usually prepare A to do list at the start of the day because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

✓ I usually prepare a to-do list at the start of the day because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it precedes a common noun starting with a consonant sound. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the compound noun.

× Uh, for insurance?

✓ Uh, for instance?

The phrase 'for insurance' is incorrect in this context and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'for instance', which means 'for example' and fits the context of giving an example.

× Some people think making this is too time consuming, or they feel they can remember everything without writing it down, or they just prefer being spontaneous rather than following a strict plan.

✓ Some people think making lists is too time-consuming, or they feel they can remember everything without writing it down, or they just prefer being spontaneous rather than following a strict plan.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here because it does not clearly refer to 'making lists'. Replacing 'this' with 'lists' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer making A to do list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient for me to carry around, I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper, and I can easily organize my test using apps that help me to manage my time more efficiently.

✓ I prefer making a to-do list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient for me to carry around, I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper, and I can easily organize my tasks using apps that help me to manage my time more efficiently.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'test' is incorrect in this context and should be 'tasks' to match the intended meaning.