列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "extra interesting" and try to use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, you can say why you prefer not to make a list and how you decide what to buy.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, if I see something interesting while shopping, I might buy it as well.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

範例: When I have a busy schedule, I make lists to prioritize my tasks. This helps me manage my work effectively because I know which tasks to do first and which can wait.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because when they see a long list of tasks, they feel anxious and overwhelmed. Therefore, they avoid making lists to reduce stress.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'for to make a list of my words'.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper when I am sitting and working because it's easier. However, when I am moving around, I use my phone to make lists because it's more convenient.

× Guess whenever I have a busy schedule then at that time I do make some lists for prioritizing which work I should be do doing 1st and which which can wait and it helps me to manage my work effectively as well.

✓ Guess whenever I have a busy schedule then at that time I do make some lists for prioritizing which work I should be doing first and which can wait and it helps me to manage my work effectively as well.

The phrase 'should be do doing' is incorrect because the verb 'do' is unnecessary and disrupts the correct use of the verb + -ing form. The correct form is 'should be doing' to express the continuous action that should be done. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' for formal correctness.

× I would like to make a list in the paper if I am sitting in a single position and doing my work, but if I am moving around then I would prefer using my phone for to make a list of my words.

✓ I would like to make a list on paper if I am sitting in a single position and doing my work, but if I am moving around then I would prefer using my phone to make a list of my words.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'paper'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing on paper. Also, 'for to make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to make' when expressing purpose.