列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to be more direct and concise. Use simpler sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details using linking words.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. I just buy what I need at the moment, and sometimes I buy extra things if I find something interesting.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and correcting grammar. Try to use words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid unnecessary words and focus on clarity.

範例: Yes, I make a list when I have a busy schedule. I prioritize my tasks so I know which ones to do first and which can wait. This method helps me manage my work effectively.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better vocabulary. Try to explain reasons more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'go on the floor'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel anxious about how much work they have. They might feel overwhelmed and stressed, so they avoid making lists.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use simple sentences and linking words to explain your preference.

範例: I prefer to use paper for lists when I stay in one place because it is easy to see. But if I am moving around, I use my phone to keep my list with me.

× I'm afraid to say that I do not make any list before going to shopping, rather I would have something to buy and during that time if I have some money and if I got something interested to buy then I would buy other things as well.

✓ I'm afraid to say that I do not make any list before going shopping; rather, I would have something to buy and during that time if I have some money and if I get something interesting to buy then I would buy other things as well.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'got' should be in present tense 'get' to match the conditional present context. 'Interested' should be 'interesting' as it describes the thing, not the person.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work. Whenever I have a busy schedule and I have a lot of work to do, then I would make a list pointing out which work should I prioritize and which I should can do later. And in that terms it helped me a lot as well.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work. Whenever I have a busy schedule and a lot of work to do, I make a list pointing out which work I should prioritize and which I can do later. In that way, it helps me a lot as well.

The sentence 'which work should I prioritize' is incorrectly structured; the correct order is 'which work I should prioritize' in indirect questions. 'Should can do' is incorrect; modal verbs should not be combined. 'In that terms' should be 'In that way' for correct expression. Also, tense consistency is needed; 'helped' should be 'helps' to match present habitual action.

× It is maybe because making the list would make them anxious that they have a lot of work to do and people are unaware of how much work to do. Then they could just go on the floor. So I guess that is why people usually don't make a list.

✓ It may be because making the list makes them anxious that they have a lot of work to do and people are unaware of how much work there is to do. Then they could just break down. So I guess that is why people usually don't make a list.

'It is maybe' should be 'It may be' for correct modal verb usage. 'Would make' is better as 'makes' to express general truth. 'Go on the floor' is an incorrect idiom; 'break down' or 'collapse' is more appropriate. Also, 'there is' is needed to complete the phrase 'how much work there is to do'.

× I would uh, recommend to use the paper if you are stick to a position and you won't be, uh, going to other place. But if you are moving constantly and you have to be be facing in other way than you have to and you should use a phone to make a list Uh, but.

✓ I would recommend using paper if you are stuck in one place and you won't be going to another place. But if you are moving constantly and have to face different directions, then you should use a phone to make a list.

'Recommend to use' should be 'recommend using' because 'recommend' is followed by a gerund. 'Stick to a position' should be 'stuck in one place' for correct expression. 'Going to other place' should be 'going to another place'. The sentence is also corrected for clarity and redundancy.