列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答较为自然，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“trust my brain that it can remember”应改为“trust my brain to remember”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意标点符号的使用。

範例: I rarely make a list when I go shopping because I trust my memory to remember what I need. For me, making a list is unnecessary.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't do”应为“haven't done”，“highly improved”应为“has greatly improved”。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅，同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

範例: I always make a list for my homework because it reminds me of the tasks I haven't done. It has greatly improved my efficiency, and I feel a sense of achievement after completing all the items.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，逻辑关系不够紧密。建议使用更准确的词汇，如“procrastination”应具体说明，并用连接词加强句子间的逻辑。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they tend to procrastinate. They usually finish tasks just before the deadline, so making a list does not help them manage their time better.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“I prefer make”应为“I prefer to make”，句子衔接不够自然。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than typing them on my phone. Writing by hand feels more natural to me, and phones can be distracting because of messages or calls. Therefore, I usually leave my phone outside my study room.

× I totally trust my brain that it can remember all the things I want to buy, As for me making a list is not necessary.

✓ I totally trust my brain to remember all the things I want to buy. As for me, making a list is not necessary.

这里“trust”后面应该接不定式“to remember”，而不是“that it can remember”。另外，句子较长，建议分成两句，且“as for me”后面应加逗号。

× I always make a list for my homework, it reminds me what I haven't do and I think it works well.

✓ I always make a list for my homework; it reminds me what I haven't done and I think it works well.

“haven't do”中的“do”应使用过去分词“done”，因为这是现在完成时态。

× It's highly improved my efficiency and I feel a sense of achievements after complete all all the things on the items.

✓ It has highly improved my efficiency and I feel a sense of achievement after completing all the things on the list.

“It's highly improved”应为“has highly improved”，使用现在完成时；“after complete”应为“after completing”，动名词形式；“achievements”应为单数“achievement”；“items”应为“list”更合适。

× I think they might have some procrastination.

✓ I think they might be procrastinators.

“have some procrastination”表达不自然，应该用“be procrastinators”表示“拖延的人”。

× They're likely to complete their task before the deadline rather than finish it earlier, so making a list makes no difference to them.

✓ They're likely to complete their tasks before the deadline rather than finish them earlier, so making a list makes no difference to them.

“task”应为复数“tasks”，与“their”一致；“it”应改为“them”，指代复数任务。

× I prefer make a list on paper compared to typing on the phone.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper compared to typing on the phone.

“prefer”后应接动名词“making”，而不是动词原形“make”。

× I'm familiar with writing by my hands and I think that phones can distract my attention.

✓ I'm familiar with writing by hand and I think that phones can distract my attention.

“by my hands”应为固定表达“by hand”，表示用手写。

× Such as new messages sent by my friends were the phone calls from my parents.

✓ For example, new messages sent by my friends or phone calls from my parents.

“Such as”不能单独作为句子开头，且“were”用法错误，应改为“or”连接两个例子。

× So I will leave my phones out of my study room.

✓ So I will leave my phone outside my study room.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，且“out of”应改为“outside”，更符合表达习惯。