列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中表达较为简单，且有重复“go shopping”词汇，建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以增加具体细节说明为什么写购物清单有帮助。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list beforehand because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

建議: 回答结构不够清晰，语法有误，建议使用更自然的表达，明确说明清单如何帮助完成工作，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and complete them more efficiently.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不自然，建议使用正确的语法结构，避免口语化的犹豫词，具体说明原因并用连接词连接句子。

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it tiring or feel too lazy to write things down before going out.

建議: 表达不够自然，语法错误，建议使用正确的形容词形式和更流畅的句子结构，具体说明手机列表的优点。

範例: I usually make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily check it anytime during work.

× I think maybe they will feel tired to making the list or they very lazy to write down some list before go walking.

✓ I think maybe they will feel tired of making the list or they are very lazy to write down some list before going walking.

动词后面接介词时，动词应使用动名词形式（-ing）。这里'tired of'后面应接动名词'making'，'before going walking'中'going'也应为动名词形式。

× I think maybe they will feel tired to making the list or they very lazy to write down some list before go walking.

✓ I think maybe they will feel tired of making the list or they are very lazy to write down some list before going walking.

句子中缺少动词'are'，导致主语和谓语不匹配，应该补充'are'使句子完整。

× I think maybe they will feel tired to making the list or they very lazy to write down some list before go walking.

✓ I think maybe they will feel tired of making the list or they are very lazy to write down some list before going walking.

'tired'后面应接介词'of'而非'to'，'before'后面应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形。

× Usually I make a list on my phone because I think it can easily and convenient to watch the list during my work time.

✓ Usually I make a list on my phone because I think it is easy and convenient to check the list during my work time.

'easily'是副词，修饰动词，形容词'easy'更适合修饰主语状态；'watch'不适合用于查看列表，改为'check'更合适。

× Usually I make a list on my phone because I think it can easily and convenient to watch the list during my work time.

✓ Usually I make a list on my phone because I think it is easy and convenient to check the list during my work time.

'easily'是副词，'convenient'是形容词，两个词性不一致，且此处应使用形容词来描述状态，故改为'easy and convenient'。

× I always write down a list before I go shopping because I think I can buy something easily when I go shopping.

✓ I always write down a list before I go shopping because I think I can buy things easily when I go shopping.

'something'指不可数或单数物品，语境中应指多个物品，故用复数形式'things'更合适。

× they very lazy to write down some list before go walking.

✓ they are very lazy to write down some list before going walking.

'before'后应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形'go'，应改为'going'。

× Of course I always make a list for my work and I think it can help me easily to finish the work.

✓ Of course I always make a list for my work and I think it can help me finish the work easily.

'help me easily to finish'中副词位置不当，'easily'应放在动词短语末尾，且不需要' to'。