列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“actually”，并且明确表达你的观点。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy a few things. I prefer to see what is available in the supermarket and decide on the spot.

建議: 回答内容较为完整，但句子较长且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意时态一致性。

範例: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and avoid procrastination. However, recently I haven't been making lists as often.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they are already busy with heavy workloads. Also, they might not realize how helpful lists can be for managing tasks.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并避免使用不准确的词汇。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it allows me to organize things the way I like. Using phone apps can be limiting since they have fixed formats.

× No, I won't make a list actually because every time when I go to the supermarket, actually I don't have many things would like to buy.

✓ No, I don't make a list actually because every time when I go to the supermarket, I don't have many things I would like to buy.

这里使用了错误的情态动词“won't”，表示将来否定，而句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时的否定形式“don't”。

× I just want to see what include in the supermarket and.

✓ I just want to see what is included in the supermarket.

句子结构不完整且缺少动词，应该使用被动语态“is included”来表达“超市里包含什么”。

× Yes, I'd like to make a list for my work and it could really help a lot on my work because making the schedule at least could make me more clear about what to do and can stop me from procrastinating.

✓ Yes, I'd like to make a list for my work and it can really help a lot with my work because making a schedule at least can make me clearer about what to do and can stop me from procrastinating.

情态动词“could”在这里表达能力或可能性时，使用“can”更合适；另外，“making the schedule”应为“making a schedule”，冠词使用错误。

× So it was pretty important for me to make a list. However, I didn't make it anymore.

✓ So it was pretty important for me to make a list. However, I don't make it anymore.

“didn't make it anymore”时态不符合上下文，表示现在不再做某事，应使用一般现在时“don't make it anymore”。

× I think that maybe because making a list also needs a lot of time, and for a lot of people they have pretty heavy workloads, therefore they don't want to spend more time on making a list.

✓ I think that maybe because making a list also needs a lot of time, and for a lot of people they have pretty heavy workloads, therefore they don't want to spend more time making a list.

动词“spend”后面接动名词时，不需要介词“on”，直接用“spend time doing something”。

× And maybe they didn't realize that there are benefits of making lists.

✓ And maybe they don't realize that there are benefits of making lists.

时态不一致，前文多用现在时，表达一般事实，应该用一般现在时“don't realize”。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because if I made lists on phones, I cannot choose the table I would like to have because it was provided by others.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because if I make lists on phones, I cannot choose the template I would like to have because it is provided by others.

“made”时态错误，应为一般现在时“make”；“table”应为“template”（模板），语义错误；“was”应为“is”，保持时态一致。

× But making the list on paper could make me to choose what I like include.

✓ But making the list on paper allows me to choose what I like to include.

“make me to choose”结构错误，正确用法是“allow sb to do sth”；“what I like include”缺少不定式“to”，应为“what I like to include”。