列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и немного повторяется. Попробуйте использовать более связные предложения и разнообразить лексику, чтобы звучать естественнее.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Since I tend to forget things easily, having a list saves me time and makes shopping more efficient.

建議: Ответ немного нечеткий и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более грамотно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: I have tried making lists for work a few times, but I found it ineffective. Therefore, I prefer to rely on my memory and handle tasks based on my own judgment.

建議: Ваш ответ не завершен и содержит разговорные выражения. Постарайтесь формулировать мысли ясно и избегать лишних слов.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They prefer to remember tasks themselves, which also helps improve their memory skills.

建議: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более плавным и естественным, используя связующие слова и разнообразную лексику.

範例: Since we live in a digital era, I prefer making my lists on my phone. It's convenient and allows me to quickly check items while shopping.

× Actually I like making a list when I shop because it is the easy way of remembering items.

✓ Actually, I like making a list when I shop because it is the easy way to remember items.

The phrase 'way of remembering' is less common and less natural than 'way to remember'. Using 'way to remember' is the correct and more natural expression in English.

× I know I had a poor memory that's why during my shopping it saves my time and by reading my to do lists.

✓ I know I have a poor memory; that's why during my shopping, it saves me time by allowing me to read my to-do lists.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency ('had' should be 'have') and awkward structure. Also, 'it saves my time and by reading' is incorrect; it should be 'it saves me time by allowing me to read'. Proper punctuation and sentence structure improve clarity.

× Well, I did it several times at my work, but it didn't work well.

✓ Well, I have done it several times at my work, but it hasn't worked well.

The present perfect tense ('have done', 'hasn't worked') is more appropriate here because the action relates to experiences up to the present, not just a completed past event.

× That's why I dislike doing making lists at work.

✓ That's why I dislike making lists at work.

The phrase 'doing making lists' is incorrect because 'doing' and 'making' are both verbs and cannot be used together like this. The correct form is simply 'making lists'.

× It's not necessary for me, just I memorize and try to do it from my point of view.

✓ It's not necessary for me; I just memorize and try to do it from my point of view.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction or punctuation between clauses. Adding a semicolon or conjunction improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Actually, it's kinda spending your time because if people try to remember in their memory, it's a good way uh, for strengthening your memory as well.

✓ Actually, it's kind of a waste of time because if people try to remember things in their memory, it's a good way to strengthen their memory as well.

'Kinda' is informal and 'spending your time' is awkward; 'kind of a waste of time' is clearer. Also, 'remember in their memory' is redundant; 'remember things' is better. Pronouns should be consistent ('people' with 'their').

× That's why in my opinion, making lists, it's spending their time and.

✓ That's why, in my opinion, making lists is a waste of their time.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. It needs a clear predicate and completion to convey the intended meaning.

× Well, we are living in digital era.

✓ Well, we are living in the digital era.

The phrase 'digital era' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific era known to both speaker and listener.

× It is really beneficial for me holding my mobile phone and reading it quickly.

✓ It is really beneficial for me to hold my mobile phone and read the list quickly.

The gerund 'holding' is incorrect here; the infinitive 'to hold' fits better. Also, 'reading it' is vague; specifying 'read the list' clarifies the meaning.