列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и прямые предложения, избегать повторов и структурировать ответ с помощью связующих слов для логичности.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because I tend to forget things. Also, it helps me plan what to cook in the evening, ensuring I have all the ingredients.

建議: Ответ неполный и неясный, с грамматическими ошибками и отсутствием связности. Рекомендуется давать чёткий ответ с объяснением, используя связующие слова и конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и логичным.

範例: No, I don't make lists for work because I am a programmer and tasks often change. Instead, I focus on completing projects step by step as they develop.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ, использовать связующие слова и конкретные причины, чтобы объяснить мнение более чётко и логично.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive. Also, creative individuals may prefer flexibility instead of following a strict plan.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит повторения, что снижает его естественность. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и чёткие предложения, избегать повторов и структурировать ответ для лучшей связности.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often forget paper lists. Also, I can easily access the list anytime and share it with my family by sending a photo.

× Yes, I do for sometimes because I don't remember quite well for for a long time.

✓ Yes, I do sometimes because I don't remember quite well for a long time.

The phrase 'for sometimes' is incorrect; 'sometimes' is an adverb and does not require 'for'. The extra 'for' is redundant and should be removed to correct the sentence.

× And also it helps me to understand what am I going to cook in the evening and also it helps me to to produce this taste of flavor in my mouth and.

✓ Also, it helps me understand what I am going to cook in the evening, and it helps me to produce this taste of flavor in my mouth.

The sentence has incorrect word order in the embedded question 'what am I going to cook'; it should be a statement 'what I am going to cook'. The repeated 'also' and 'to to' are errors. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. The correction fixes word order, removes redundancy, and completes the sentence properly.

× No, I don't because I work in program sphere and it cannot be predicted into in the long terms.

✓ No, I don't because I work in the programming sphere and it cannot be predicted in the long term.

The phrase 'in program sphere' is missing the article 'the' and 'program' should be 'programming' to be correct. The phrase 'predicted into in the long terms' is incorrect; 'predicted in the long term' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'terms' should be singular 'term'.

× We have to do step by step your own project and you maybe if you want to improve your skills you need.

✓ We have to do our own project step by step, and if you want to improve your skills, you need to.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and incomplete clauses. 'Step by step your own project' should be 'our own project step by step'. The phrase 'you maybe if you want to improve your skills you need' is incomplete and confusing; it is corrected to a conditional clause with proper punctuation.

× I think it depends on the previous practice at school when they have a negative impact in their marks.

✓ I think it depends on previous practice at school when they had a negative impact on their marks.

The phrase 'have a negative impact in their marks' is incorrect; it should be 'had a negative impact on their marks' to match past tense and correct preposition usage.

× Also, we are very creative and that's why we have failed to understand what are you going to do next.

✓ Also, we are very creative, and that's why we have failed to understand what we are going to do next.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here because the subject is 'we'. The embedded question 'what are you going to do next' should be a statement 'what we are going to do next' to match the subject and sentence structure.

× So step by step not but just.

✓ So, step by step, not just all at once.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'not just all at once' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone just because I always forget paper on my tea table and asking my relatives to take a make a picture, take a picture brings me always at my phone to watch the list digital photo in the same way.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always forget paper on my tea table, and asking my relatives to take a picture always brings me to my phone to view the digital photo of the list in the same way.

The phrase 'bring me always at my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'brings me to my phone'. The phrase 'take a make a picture' is redundant; 'take a picture' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.