列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and coherent. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'helps me' and clarify your example more precisely. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases. For instance, last week I visited a popular store in South Korea called Hai, and having my list made shopping much easier and faster.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid informal expressions like 'more fastly'. Also, be concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and stay motivated. Without a list, I often forget things and cannot finish my work efficiently. Therefore, writing a list helps me complete tasks more quickly and effectively.

建議: Your answer has some unclear expressions and grammar errors. Avoid using informal or unclear words like 'flex' without explanation. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically and improve sentence structure.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because it makes them feel obligated to complete tasks. They prefer to have flexibility in their work, but writing a list can make them feel restricted, which is why they avoid it.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammar mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: It depends on the situation, but usually I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime. In contrast, paper lists are less convenient to carry and refer to when needed.

× For example, last week I went to the shop that it's named Hai, so it's really popular in South Korea and it helped me Shopuru.

✓ For example, last week I went to the shop that is named Hai, so it's really popular in South Korea and it helped me Shopuru.

The phrase 'that it's named Hai' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'that is named Hai' to properly introduce the shop's name.

× But if I write a list it helps me complete more fastly.

✓ But if I write a list it helps me complete faster.

The word 'fastly' is not a correct adverb in English. The correct comparative adverb form is 'faster'. Using 'faster' correctly modifies the verb 'complete'.

× Right now they are more flex.

✓ Right now they are more flexible.

The word 'flex' is a verb or noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'they'. The correct adjective is 'flexible'. Using 'flexible' properly describes the state of 'they'.

× But if they write down a list then it it's not that easy to be flex.

✓ But if they write down a list then it's not that easy to be flexible.

The phrase 'it it's' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'it's'. Also, 'flex' should be 'flexible' as an adjective to describe the ease of being flexible.

× So that's why people doesn't like making a list.

✓ So that's why people don't like making a list.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number.

× But if I bring paper, it's not that easy to look look up when I when I really need that.

✓ But if I bring paper, it's not that easy to look up when I really need that.

The phrase 'look look up' contains a repeated word 'look'. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence. Also, 'look up' is the correct phrasal verb here.