列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì trong câu. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'start starting' hay 'this big problem happen'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting any tasks, especially for work or shopping, because it helps me stay organized and not forget anything important. However, sometimes unexpected problems occur, so I have to adjust my plans, and the list doesn't always work perfectly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to be spontaneous. For example, they may feel that following a strict plan limits their freedom to do things their own way. Personally, I like making lists because they help me stay organized, but I understand that everyone has different preferences.

建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'OCD' và cải thiện cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's easier to organize, erase, or check off items once I have finished them, which makes it very convenient.

× Moreover, it can avoid me from over buying the things that.

✓ Moreover, it can help me avoid overbuying things.

The phrase 'avoid me from over buying' is incorrect. The verb 'avoid' should be followed directly by a gerund (-ing form) without 'me from'. Also, 'over buying' should be one word 'overbuying'. The corrected sentence uses 'help me avoid overbuying' which is grammatically correct.

× Yes, I usually make a list before start starting any tests, especially for work or shopping because it's helped me stay organized and not forgetting anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before starting any tasks, especially for work or shopping because it helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

The phrase 'before start starting' is incorrect; it should be 'before starting' using the gerund form after 'before'. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present tense context. 'Not forgetting' should be 'not forget' to maintain parallel structure.

× However, sometimes this big problem happen when I'm out and I have to adjust my plans so the list doesn't always work perfectly.

✓ However, sometimes this big problem happens when I'm out and I have to adjust my plans, so the list doesn't always work perfectly.

The verb 'happen' should be in the third person singular present tense 'happens' to agree with the singular subject 'this big problem'.

× Some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and prefer to be more spontaneous.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to be more spontaneous.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context.

× For example, they might feel a fault following a strict plan limit their freedom to do things on their own way.

✓ For example, they might feel that following a strict plan limits their freedom to do things their own way.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing words. 'Feel a fault' is incorrect; it should be 'feel that'. 'Limit' should be 'limits' to agree with singular subject 'following a strict plan'. 'On their own way' should be 'their own way'.

× I personally like making lists because the same mistake organize, but I'd understand that everyone has different.

✓ I personally like making lists because they help me stay organized, but I understand that everyone is different.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'The same mistake organize' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'they help me stay organized'. 'Everyone has different' is incomplete; it should be 'everyone is different'.

× Phone OCD. I'm just literally taking the phone with me all the time, so writing a list on the phone might be better to me.

✓ I have phone OCD. I literally take my phone with me all the time, so writing a list on the phone might be better for me.

'Phone OCD' is a fragment and unclear; adding 'I have' clarifies it. 'Taking the phone with me' should be 'take my phone with me' for correct pronoun use and tense. 'Better to me' should be 'better for me'.

× You can easily organise and erase or taking the one that you have finishes too so it's quite convenient.

✓ You can easily organise and erase items or take the ones that you have finished, so it's quite convenient.

The phrase 'or taking the one that you have finishes' is incorrect. It should be parallel with 'organise and erase' using base verbs: 'or take the ones that you have finished'. 'Finishes' should be 'finished' (past participle).