列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“make a list doing shopping”应为“make a list when shopping”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it easy to remember what I need to buy, and making a list feels a bit complicated and tiring.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“does often works”应为“does often work”。建议直接回答问题，句子结构更清晰，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Since I'm a student, I don't make lists for work, but I do create them with my teammates for school projects. This often works well because it helps us manage our timeline and meet deadlines without stress.

建議: 句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如“this making as complex”应为“making lists is complex”。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it complex and time-consuming. Moreover, if they fail to follow the list, they might feel frustrated and upset.

建議: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“in your funds”应为“on your phone”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. If I use my phone, it's easier to forget since there are too many apps distracting me.

× Well, I think I usually won't make a list doing shopping because I think it's quite simple for me to memorize the goods that I have to buy doing the shopping and I think it's way too complicated and tiresome to do so.

✓ Well, I think I usually don't make a list when shopping because I think it's quite simple for me to memorize the goods that I have to buy when shopping and I think it's way too complicated and tiresome to do so.

句中“won't”用法不当，表示将来否定，而此处表达习惯性行为应使用一般现在时的否定形式“don't”。此外，“doing shopping”应改为“when shopping”更符合英语习惯。

× Well since I'm a student I don't have to make this for the work, but I do make this with my teammates for my school project and it does often works since it really helped manage our timeline and help us hit the deadline without stress.

✓ Well, since I'm a student I don't have to make this for work, but I do make this with my teammates for my school project and it often works since it really helps manage our timeline and helps us hit the deadline without stress.

“does often works”中助动词“does”与动词“works”重复，应去掉“does”，改为“often works”。另外，后半句时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“helps”而非过去时“helped”。

× Well, I guess that's because some people may think this making as complex and time consuming and if you couldn't follow what the list have planned, you could feel even more frustrated and upset.

✓ Well, I guess that's because some people may think making lists is complex and time consuming, and if you can't follow what the list has planned, you could feel even more frustrated and upset.

“this making”用法不当，应改为“making lists”。“list have planned”主谓不一致，list为单数，应改为“list has planned”。时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时“can't”。

× Well, I prefer making this on paper because by doing so you definitely have to write something down by your own hands. Well if you make a list in your funds, it could be easier to forget since there's too many app on the phone.

✓ Well, I prefer making lists on paper because by doing so you definitely have to write something down with your own hands. Well, if you make a list on your phone, it could be easier to forget since there are too many apps on the phone.

“by your own hands”应改为“with your own hands”，表示用手写。“make a list in your funds”应为“make a list on your phone”，funds用词错误。复数名词“app”应为“apps”，且“there's”应改为“there are”以匹配复数。