列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'items spawner spontaneously'. Try to use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, you could say: 'I sometimes make a shopping list, but often I shop spontaneously without planning.'

範例: I sometimes make a shopping list, but often I shop spontaneously without planning. This is because I usually visit the shop for random items rather than specific needs.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'busy', you could say: 'I make lists for my work when I have a heavy workload, and this usually helps me manage my tasks effectively.'

範例: I make lists for my work when I have a heavy workload, and this usually helps me manage my tasks effectively. By scheduling my activities, I can prioritise and complete my work on time.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to complete your ideas fully and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect reasons logically. For example: 'Some people dislike making lists because they tend to include too many tasks and feel discouraged when they cannot complete them. Additionally, others may resist lists because they prefer flexibility and dislike strict schedules.'

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they tend to include too many tasks and feel discouraged when they cannot complete them. Additionally, others may resist lists because they prefer flexibility and dislike strict schedules.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'it usually sets many interesting games for me'. Try to explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. For example: 'I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help organise tasks. I downloaded one app that motivates me with gamified features, which helps me stay productive.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help organise tasks. I downloaded one app that motivates me with gamified features, which helps me stay productive.

× I make a list when I shop, but I don't do it very often because I usually go to the shop just for random purpose.

✓ I make a list when I shop, but I don't do it very often because I usually go to the shop just for random purposes.

The word 'purpose' should be plural 'purposes' because it refers to various reasons or aims, not just one. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about multiple unspecified reasons.

× I choose items spawner spontaneously and I don't have plans.

✓ I choose items spontaneously and I don't have plans.

The word 'spawner' is incorrect here; it seems to be a typo or misuse. The correct phrase is 'choose items spontaneously', meaning to select items on the spur of the moment without planning.

× I make lists for my work when I am particularly busy, but I don't usually do that either.

✓ I make lists for my work when I am particularly busy, but I don't usually do that either.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed.

× When I'm busy, I list my work and schedule things.

✓ When I'm busy, I list my work and schedule things.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error detected.

× Because some people for one reason, they list too many things to complete and they always found themselves for short in completing them, so they don't have the motivation to continue to do that.

✓ Because some people, for one reason, they list too many things to complete and they always find themselves falling short in completing them, so they don't have the motivation to continue doing that.

The verb 'found' should be 'find' to match the present tense context. Also, the phrase 'found themselves for short' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'find themselves falling short'. Additionally, 'continue to do that' is better expressed as 'continue doing that'.

× Another reason is that many people can't embrace the change. They think that the.

✓ Another reason is that many people can't embrace change. They think that the...

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, 'embrace the change' is better as 'embrace change' unless referring to a specific change. The sentence needs completion for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays there are many good apps that can help people arrange things and make schedule on App Store.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays there are many good apps that can help people arrange things and make schedules on the App Store.

The phrase 'make schedule' should be 'make schedules' to indicate plural and correct noun form. Also, 'on App Store' should be 'on the App Store' because 'App Store' is a specific place requiring the definite article.

× I choose one and download it and it usually sets many interesting games for me to get motivated and I benefit from it a lot.

✓ I choose one and download it, and it usually sets many interesting goals for me to get motivated, and I benefit from it a lot.

The sentence is a run-on and needs commas to separate clauses. Also, 'sets many interesting games' is likely incorrect; 'sets many interesting goals' fits better in context. Using commas improves readability and clarity.