列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. Try to combine your ideas more smoothly and use varied vocabulary to sound more natural.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember essential items. Moreover, having a list ensures I don't forget anything important, making my shopping more efficient.

建議: Your response addresses the question but could be more concise and use better linking words. Also, clarify what you mean by 'divide my skills into different sections' to make your point clearer.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. Additionally, it improves my time management by allowing me to prioritize and organize my responsibilities effectively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more natural by avoiding phrases like 'I feel like' repeatedly. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid direct contradiction like 'But they are wrong' which sounds harsh.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they think it takes too much time and isn't helpful. However, I believe lists are useful as they help prioritize tasks and reduce stress by managing time better.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone using the Notes app because it's convenient and always with me. This way, I can quickly jot down details anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget to carry.

× I always make a list of things before I go for shopping.

✓ I always make a list of things before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for'. This is a common collocation in English where 'go' is directly followed by the activity in its -ing form without 'for'.

× I feel like it helps me to never forget an essential product that needed to be bought.

✓ I feel like it helps me to never forget an essential product that needs to be bought.

The verb 'needed' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a general or habitual action, so the present tense 'needs' should be used. Using the present tense here correctly indicates that the product currently requires buying.

× So I feel like a list is an important part before going shopping.

✓ So I feel like a list is an important part of going shopping.

The phrase 'an important part before going shopping' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate that the list is part of the shopping process. 'Before' is not appropriate here as it suggests a time reference rather than a part-whole relationship.

× I always make a list for my work as I believe making a list helps me remember all the essential tasks that are needed to be completed before time.

✓ I always make a list for my work as I believe making a list helps me remember all the essential tasks that need to be completed on time.

The phrase 'needed to be completed before time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'need to be completed on time' meaning by the deadline. 'Before time' is not a standard English expression in this context.

× A list helps me with my time management and how to divide my skills into different sections.

✓ A list helps me with my time management and how to divide my tasks into different sections.

The phrase 'divide my skills into different sections' is semantically incorrect. Skills are abilities and are not typically divided into sections. The intended meaning is likely about dividing tasks or work, so 'tasks' is more appropriate here.

× some people don't like making lists as they believe that it is time consuming and does not really help them with their work.

✓ some people don't like making lists as they believe that it is time-consuming and does not really help them with their work.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context. This is a standard rule in English to form compound adjectives.

× it helps them to prioritize their tasks and manage their time more effectively with reducing the stress.

✓ it helps them to prioritize their tasks and manage their time more effectively by reducing the stress.

The phrase 'with reducing the stress' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the means or method of managing time more effectively.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone as in my Notes app.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone, using my Notes app.

The phrase 'as in my Notes app' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'using my Notes app' to indicate the tool or application used on the phone.

× It makes me easier and it is convenient for me to write and jot down every detail that is needed at the time.

✓ It makes it easier and is convenient for me to write and jot down every detail that is needed at the time.

The phrase 'It makes me easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is an adjective and cannot describe a person directly. The correct phrase is 'It makes it easier' referring to the task or process. Also, 'and it is' can be shortened to 'and is' for better flow.

× As I carry my mobile phone everywhere so it makes me convenient to do it rather than making a list on paper.

✓ As I carry my mobile phone everywhere, it is more convenient for me to do it rather than making a list on paper.

The phrase 'it makes me convenient' is incorrect because 'convenient' is an adjective describing things, not people. The correct expression is 'it is more convenient for me'. Also, the conjunction 'As' and 'so' should not be used together; here, 'As' alone suffices, and a comma is needed after the introductory clause.