列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Honestly, I don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to decide on the spot, but I always end up buying things that I don't need, which can be quite wasteful. I should try to make a list when I shop next time.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I do make a list for my work. Before I start my day, I actually look through my emails and take note of the things that I need to do during the day. This helps me keep track of my progress and make sure I don't miss anything on the list.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Umm, that's a great question. I'm not actually sure why some people don't like making a list. On my personal experience, I like to make a list of my tasks that I need to perform during the day for my work. But.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I personally like making a list on my phone. It's on the go. It's pretty convenient when I need to look up my list. For example, when I go travel and buy souvenirs for my colleagues, the list will allow me to.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is clear and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add a reason and a concluding thought using linking words to improve coherence.
範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I like to decide spontaneously. However, this often leads me to buy unnecessary items, so I plan to start making lists to avoid waste.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 85.0建議: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words and slightly more varied vocabulary to make it more engaging.
範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. Firstly, I review my emails to identify tasks, then I note them down. This method helps me stay organised and ensures I don't overlook any important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 50.0建議: Your answer lacks a direct response and supporting details. Try to give a clear opinion or possible reasons why some people dislike lists, and avoid hesitation or incomplete sentences.
範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find them restrictive or time-consuming. In my experience, lists help me stay organised, but I understand that others prefer flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 65.0建議: Your answer is somewhat incomplete and could be more coherent. Try to complete your example and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me. For instance, when I travel and buy souvenirs for colleagues, I can easily check my list to remember what to get.
文法
× But.
✓ However, I am not sure why some people don't like making lists.
The sentence 'But.' is incomplete and lacks a main clause, making it a sentence fragment. To correct this, it should be connected to a complete thought, such as 'However, I am not sure why some people don't like making lists.' This provides clarity and proper sentence structure.
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