列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'I don't make a list' and improve grammar such as 'plan my thing' should be 'plan my things'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to go with the flow. I buy things that come to my mind and what I really need at the moment.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has some incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your thoughts logically and complete your sentences.

範例: No, I don't usually make a written list for my work. Instead, I plan my tasks mentally because I prefer to be spontaneous. However, I sometimes consider writing lists but I haven't tried it yet.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing such as 'People like me don't like me making lists'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

範例: Some people, including me, dislike making lists because it feels like a chore. Since work is already tiring, writing lists adds extra burden. Therefore, I prefer to organize my tasks mentally.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but can be improved by avoiding informal phrases like 'not my cup of tea' in formal speaking. Also, avoid incomplete or unclear endings like 'Check'. Use linking words to compare options smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts that way. Although writing on the phone is convenient, I feel more comfortable using pen and paper.

× I'm an outgoing person and I don't like to plan my thing.

✓ I'm an outgoing person and I don't like to plan my things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or activities that the speaker might plan. Using singular 'thing' is incorrect here as it does not match the intended meaning.

× So when I go for shopping, I buy things that comes in my mind and the things which I really needed.

✓ So when I go shopping, I buy things that come to my mind and the things which I really need.

The verb 'comes' should be 'come' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to maintain present tense consistency. Additionally, 'go for shopping' is better expressed as 'go shopping'.

× I do not make the list of the work I need to do.

✓ I do not make a list of the work I need to do.

The article 'the' is incorrect here; 'a list' is more appropriate because it refers to any list, not a specific one. This is related to article usage but also affects singular/plural sense.

× But like but taking pen and paper and listing it or taking phone, mobile or?

✓ But I don't like taking pen and paper to list things or using my phone or mobile.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. It lacks proper structure and clarity. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× People like me don't like me making lists because it is.

✓ People like me don't like making lists because it is.

The phrase 'don't like me making lists' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'don't like making lists' to express a general dislike without awkward pronoun usage.

× It feels like a chore.

✓ It feels like a chore.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.

× It's already tiresome that we have to do work and additionally, writing it feels like burden.

✓ It's already tiresome that we have to do work and additionally, writing it feels like a burden.

The noun 'burden' requires the article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in this context.

× So instead of writing it, I prepare things in my mind.

✓ So instead of writing it down, I prepare things in my mind.

Adding 'down' after 'writing' is necessary to complete the phrasal verb 'write down', which means to record something. Without it, the sentence is incomplete.

× I like to note down on paper though it seems writing on phone is easier, but it's not my cup of tea.

✓ I like to note things down on paper though writing on the phone seems easier, but it's not my cup of tea.

The phrase 'note down' requires an object, so 'things' is added. Also, 'writing on phone' should be 'writing on the phone' to include the definite article. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to write down, list out and do my work according to it. Check.

✓ I prefer to write things down, list them out, and do my work according to it.

The verbs need objects to be clear. Also, the word 'Check' at the end is unnecessary and unclear in this context, so it is removed.