列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"shopping make"は"shopping makes"）を直し、より具体的な理由や感情を加えると良いでしょう。また、文を2〜3文に分けて簡潔にすると効果的です。

範例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing freely. Making a list feels like a duty, which takes away the fun from shopping.

建議: 回答は内容が明確で効果的ですが、"for studying schedules"は"for my study schedule"の方が自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my study schedule, and it really helps me. By making a list, I can clearly see what I need to do each day, so I stay organized.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも不完全です。"As they like"の部分は意味が伝わりにくいので、理由を具体的に説明し、文を完結にすることが必要です。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to be more flexible with their time.

建議: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法的な誤りもあります。"It's a little bothers me"は"It's a little bothersome"が正しいです。理由を明確にし、文を完結させましょう。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Using paper requires pens and can be bothersome, so my phone is easier to use.

× I don't make a list because I like enjoying shopping in my mood.

✓ I don't make a list because I like enjoying shopping in my own way.

The phrase 'in my mood' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'in my own way' to convey doing something according to one's preference or style.

× If I make a list, I think that shopping make some duty for me.

✓ If I make a list, I think that shopping makes some duty for me.

The subject 'shopping' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number.

× By making a list I can see the things I have to do in the day clearly.

✓ By making a list, I can see the things I have to do during the day clearly.

The phrase 'in the day' is less natural; 'during the day' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate time span.

× I think by making a list those people feel like they cannot move. As they like.

✓ I think by making a list, those people feel like they cannot move as they like.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because on paper I have to prepare some papers and pens.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because with paper I have to prepare some papers and pens.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to using paper as a medium; 'with' is appropriate here.

× It's a little bothers me so on phone I.

✓ It bothers me a little, so I prefer using my phone.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical; restructuring it provides a clear and correct expression.