列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Hạn chế sử dụng các câu ngắt quãng và từ lặp lại.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time. For example, last week I prepared a list for a friend's birthday party to make sure I didn't forget any gifts.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work and studies. For instance, I create a timetable that helps me organize my tasks effectively. This method has helped me remember my responsibilities and manage my time better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích rõ lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy tránh nói lặp lại và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it restrictive or uncomfortable. For example, they may prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a strict plan.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và ngắt quãng.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I grew up using traditional methods. For instance, writing things down helps me remember better and I find it more convenient than using my phone.

× I will make a list when I shop.

✓ I make a list when I shop.

The question is about a habitual action, so the present simple tense should be used instead of the future tense 'will make'.

× Like I will make a list to prepare someone something.

✓ Like I will make a list to prepare something for someone.

The preposition 'for' is needed after 'prepare' to indicate the beneficiary of the action. The original sentence lacks this preposition, causing confusion.

× I will make a list to prepare someone something.

✓ I make a list to prepare something for someone.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate instead of future tense 'will make'.

× I will make a list for my words like I will.

✓ I always make a list for my work, like I do.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present simple tense should be used instead of future tense 'will make'. Also, 'words' is likely a typo for 'work'.

× It's helped me remember what what should I do every time.

✓ It helps me remember what I should do every time.

The present perfect 'has helped' is incorrectly used here; the present simple 'helps' fits better to express a general truth or habitual effect. Also, the word order in the embedded question is incorrect; it should be 'what I should do'.

× I've never think about it before

✓ I've never thought about it before

After 'have' in present perfect tense, the past participle form 'thought' should be used instead of the base form 'think'.

× if I need to talk something

✓ if I need to talk about something

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to a topic. The original sentence omits this preposition, making it incorrect.

× I will say some people dislike make a list

✓ I will say some people dislike making a list

After 'dislike', the gerund form 'making' should be used instead of the base verb 'make'.

× dislike make a list when they when they work or study because they feel uncomfortable.

✓ dislike making a list when they work or study because they feel uncomfortable.

The repeated phrase 'when they' is redundant and should be corrected to a single 'when they'. Also, 'dislike making' is the correct verb form.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I was born in, in the technology, not that developed.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I was born in a time when technology was not that developed.

The phrase 'born in, in the technology' is incorrect. It should be 'born in a time when technology was not that developed' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I used to, I used to, I used to do anything with paper like.

✓ I used to do everything with paper.

The repetition 'I used to' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'anything' is not appropriate here; 'everything' fits better to express habitual past actions.