列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和重复用词，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更丰富的词汇。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need and shop more efficiently.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and complete them efficiently.

建議: 回答内容较为清晰，但表达略显简单，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，丰富内容表达。

範例: Some people find making lists unnecessary because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel confident managing tasks mentally without writing them down.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，注意句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Actually, I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting due to notifications from apps like TikTok, whereas paper lists help me focus better.

× For example when I was going a shop, I always make a list to list what I want to buy and I can buy quickly.

✓ For example, when I was going to a shop, I always made a list to list what I wanted to buy so I could buy quickly.

句子中描述过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。'was going'是过去进行时，后面应接不定式'to a shop'，'make'和'want'应改为过去式'made'和'wanted'，'can'改为过去式'could'。此外，'going a shop'缺少介词'to'。

× Yes I do. I often make a list for my work that because I like to list everything I want to work and I can know I and I can know what I want to do clearly and I can make it make it come true and it work very well.

✓ Yes, I do. I often make a list for my work because I like to list everything I want to work on, and I can know what I want to do clearly, and I can make it come true, and it works very well.

句子中存在多个问题：'that because'应为'because'；'want to work'后缺少介词'on'；'I can know I'重复且不通顺，应删去多余部分；'it work'主谓不一致，'it'为第三人称单数，动词应加's'变为'works'。

× Some people think that making list is unnecessary. That's because they think their tasks are in their brain and they can do things and work follow their brain, so they don't need to list something.

✓ Some people think that making lists is unnecessary. That's because they think their tasks are in their brain and they can do things and work following their brain, so they don't need to list anything.

'making list'应为复数'making lists'；'work follow their brain'中缺少介词，改为'work following their brain'；'list something'搭配不当，改为'list anything'更合适。

× Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper umm because I think if I make a list on my phone, I may I may be interrupted by something apartment by some apps like Tiktok or other, but when I write it on paper, I can see it clearly.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think if I make a list on my phone, I may be interrupted by something, perhaps by some apps like TikTok or others, but when I write it on paper, I can see it clearly.

'something apartment by some apps'表达错误，应为'something, perhaps by some apps'；'other'应为'others'表示复数；去掉多余重复的'I may'。