列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but the phrase "And yes and no" is informal and slightly confusing. Try to start directly with a clear topic sentence. Also, avoid redundancy such as "I often jot down a list of necessities and nothing slips off my mind"; instead, say "I often jot down a list of necessities to ensure I don't forget anything." Use linking words more smoothly to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of necessities to ensure I don't forget anything. However, I also like to explore the store and discover new products, so I spend some time browsing beyond my list.

建議: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, but there is a small repetition "pleasant a pleasant" and a filler "uh" which should be avoided. Also, the phrase "in black and white" is idiomatic but could be clearer if you say "clearly written down." Try to use linking words like "Moreover" or "Additionally" to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always create a list of my tasks to stay organised. Moreover, I use a daily calendar to prioritize and schedule my work clearly. Checking off items on the list gives me a sense of accomplishment.

建議: Your answer is clear and provides good reasons. To improve, try to use linking words such as "because" or "therefore" to connect your ideas more logically. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "waste of time" and "more well spent doing the tasks"; instead, express it more concisely.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it wastes time that could be spent doing tasks. Additionally, they may lack effective organizing skills and overestimate their available time, which makes them feel overwhelmed later.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear in the phrase "for my every test, everyday tasks." Try to clarify this and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words like "however" to contrast your preferences. Try to be more specific about why you prefer the phone over paper.

範例: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because I use scheduling and reminder apps that help me stay organized. However, for long-term plans, I sometimes prefer to write them down on paper.

× I often jot down a list of necessities and nothing slips off my mind.

✓ I often jot down a list of necessities and nothing slips from my mind.

The phrase 'slips off my mind' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'slips from my mind' meaning to forget something. This is an issue with the use of prepositions, but since 'Incorrect use of the definite article' is the closest category, it is noted here. To improve, use the correct idiomatic expression 'slips from my mind'.

× It is also a pleasant a pleasant feeling to check off, uh, items in the list and it gives you a sense of accomplishment.

✓ It is also a pleasant feeling to check off, uh, items in the list and it gives you a sense of accomplishment.

The phrase 'a pleasant a pleasant feeling' contains a repeated article and adjective, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'a pleasant' corrects the sentence. This is related to article usage and sentence structure.

× I think some people might view making lists as a waste of time, and they think their time is more well spent doing the tasks.

✓ I think some people might view making lists as a waste of time, and they think their time is better spent doing the tasks.

The phrase 'more well spent' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'better spent'. This is an issue with adjective/adverb usage and comparative forms. To improve, use 'better spent' instead of 'more well spent'.

× Some may have never learned effective organizing methods and they tend to overestimate their time and energy while writing the list and feel overwhelmed later.

✓ Some may have never learned effective organizing methods, and they tend to overestimate their time and energy when writing the list and feel overwhelmed later.

The phrase 'while writing the list' is acceptable but 'when writing the list' is more appropriate to indicate the time of the action. This is a minor preposition usage issue. To improve, use 'when' instead of 'while' for clarity.

× I prefer doing it on my smart phone because I often use scheduling or reminder apps.

✓ I prefer doing it on my smartphone because I often use scheduling or reminder apps.

The word 'smart phone' should be written as one word 'smartphone'. This is a spelling issue rather than a preposition issue, but it affects correctness. To improve, write 'smartphone' as one word.