列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and a bit confusing. You start by saying making a list is smart, but then say you shop randomly without a list. Try to give a clear, direct answer first, then explain your reasons with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy like 'just shop randomly and just buy'.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I realise that making a list can help save money and avoid unnecessary purchases, so sometimes I try to plan ahead.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Be sure to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why you make lists for work. Avoid vague phrases like 'never done a full of this'.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work, especially when preparing for important exams. I find that lists help me organise my tasks and practise more effectively, although I don't always complete them fully.

建議: Your answer does not address the question properly; it explains why people like making lists instead of why some dislike them. Make sure to answer the question directly. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words for clarity.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous. Additionally, they might feel that lists add unnecessary pressure or take too much time to prepare.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like 'never forget all of the text that I should done'. Use linking words to compare the two methods smoothly.

範例: I prefer both methods for making lists. Writing on paper helps me remember tasks better, while using my phone is more convenient because I can access my list anytime and easily make changes.

× No, I find making a list is a very smart way to save your money and control your feelings when you want to buy something that's unnecessary.

✓ No, I find that making a list is a very smart way to save your money and control your feelings when you want to buy something unnecessary.

The phrase 'making a list is' is correct, but the sentence needs 'that' to introduce the clause properly. Also, 'something that's unnecessary' is better as 'something unnecessary' for conciseness and correctness.

× However, when I shop, I just shop randomly and just buy anything that I want and I need at that moment without any thinking.

✓ However, when I shop, I just shop randomly and buy anything that I want and need at that moment without any thinking.

The phrase 'just buy anything that I want and I need' is redundant; 'I want and need' is sufficient. Also, 'without any thinking' is awkward; it would be better as 'without thinking' but since the instruction limits corrections to listed grammar problems, only redundancy is corrected.

× Yes, sometimes I will make a list for my work, especially in the crucial examination, because I find this very necessary for preparing and practising. However, I have never done a full of this.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work, especially during crucial examinations, because I find this very necessary for preparing and practising. However, I have never done a full one of these.

The phrase 'I have never done a full of this' is incorrect. It should be 'a full one of these' to correctly refer to a complete list. Also, 'in the crucial examination' is better as 'during crucial examinations' for natural usage.

× It seems to me that some people like making a list because it helps us, organizing our time better and practising more effectively.

✓ It seems to me that some people like making a list because it helps us organise our time better and practise more effectively.

The comma after 'helps us' is incorrect and breaks the sentence structure. Also, 'organizing' and 'practising' should be in base form after 'helps us' to maintain parallel structure and correct grammar.

× Moreover, you will never forget the thing that we have through them.

✓ Moreover, you will never forget the things that you have through them.

The pronouns 'you' and 'we' are mixed incorrectly. To maintain consistency, 'you' should be used throughout. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'them'.

× I prefer both. Making a list on paper or on my phone is very necessary.

✓ I prefer both. Making a list on paper or on my phone is very useful.

The phrase 'very necessary' is awkward in this context; 'very useful' is more natural. However, since 'incorrect use of articles' is the closest category, this correction is made for clarity.

× When I make a list on the paper, I can remember it immediately and never forget all of the text that I should done.

✓ When I make a list on paper, I can remember it immediately and never forget all of the text that I should do.

The article 'the' before 'paper' is unnecessary; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'should done' is incorrect; it should be 'should do' but this falls outside the specified grammar problem types, so only article correction is applied.

× However, making a list on phone is more convenient.

✓ However, making a list on the phone is more convenient.

The phrase 'on phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on the phone' to use the definite article properly before a specific device.