列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrases like "makes my mind more ordered" and "would think of another things that wouldn't disturb my shopping." Instead, use simple and clear expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and not forget anything important.

建議: Avoid filler words like "umm" and incomplete sentences such as "Like wasting my time on unnecessary things." Make your answer more structured by giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and avoid distractions, such as spending too much time on my phone.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Avoid repeating the same idea and finish your sentences properly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear opinion.

範例: Some people believe that making lists can be distracting, but in my opinion, lists help me stay organized and focused.

建議: Try to avoid phrases like "In my own thoughts" which sound unnatural. Also, break your answer into shorter sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it frequently. This way, I can easily check my tasks and stay organized throughout the day.

× I usually make a list when I go shopping because it makes my mind more ordered or I would think of another things that wouldn't disturb my shopping.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because it makes my mind more ordered or I would think of other things that wouldn't disturb my shopping.

The phrase 'another things' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular countable nouns, while 'things' is plural. The correct quantifier for plural nouns is 'other'. So, 'another things' should be 'other things'. This helps maintain correct singular/plural agreement.

× Some people think that lists would distract them more, and it depends on the person. In my opinion, making lists don't. Making lists don't distract me at all.

✓ Some people think that lists would distract them more, and it depends on the person. In my opinion, making lists doesn't. Making lists don't distract me at all.

The subject 'making lists' is singular (gerund phrase treated as singular), so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Using 'don't' with a singular subject is a singular/plural agreement error.

× Making lists don't distract me at all.

✓ Making lists doesn't distract me at all.

The subject 'Making lists' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb must be singular 'doesn't' instead of plural 'don't'. This is a subject-verb agreement error related to singular and plural forms.